Sy_Accursed
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Ok uploaded hopefully for last time, don;t think there is anything left to tweak now
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Looks good! Now try covering the whole nearest hill (the one he's on) with that kind of texture. Make the size of the grass texture appropriate to how far away it is. So for the next hill, you'd make it a lot smaller until eventually you're just putting 1 pixel dots down on the further away hills.I have dun a little bit around the base of the staff. Could I have feedback on it before i go do more, dun wanna waste time if it not gdI dunno if you or other people like that kind of idea of the texture but hey, it seems to look a lot better then just plain grass green.
Ya I like it, just couldn't find any ones tht had so couldn't figure how it was dun, i'll update again once thts dun
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Its from Pink Floyd :(
:P
a play on darkside? and Paw_Claw... most people in off topic and media dont actually play rs anymore :P
oooo. didn't know tht
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I have dun a little bit around the base of the staff. Could I have feedback on it before i go do more, dun wanna waste time if it not gd
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I like the pixel character, very gd. But again i agrre with others tht the other part is not gd, maybe try making it complimen the colours of the pixel more rather than such a stark contrast
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Awesome tutorial man
Definatley helped me turn both my drawing talnets and image eidtting talents to pixel art, whihc I nvr quite understood b4 and produce over the course of a day my first pixel sig
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Looks nice. One thing that hasn't been mentioned is the lack of texture. Grass (well close up at least) isn't just all one colour. It screams out texture me.
Another thing is that his face stands out a lot because it has black outline on it and nothing else does. If you're going to do the no black outline style, make sure it's consistent... otherwise it looks a bit weird (maybe try a darker skin colour?)
Last but not least is the sun, which is well, too big I guess. Kinda looks like the sun is another hill but just orange and all flamey.
Just what I think, it's a lot better than a lot of other peoples first tries. :wink:
Ok I sorted his face out and shrunk the sun andf fair bit.
But I can't think of how to give the grass more texture than it already has the varies green tones, so nay furhter input on that would be helpful
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Hmn - not fond on the second one at all, sorry. Too rainbowey, lines are sharp to the point where they look unantialiased, not really digging the waveform either...sorry to be so negative, but compared to your first work...
I think thoose type of sigs are highly depedant on personal tastes where as the actualy cartoon like rs tehemd ones tned to be liked by all here as we are all rsers
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Looks like it will be very good once you got all the shading on it done
Althouhg i must say they 2 rear people seem to be a bit squashed and their helsm r very wide, but not really muhc you can do bout tht. Still looks gd i just wanted to have sumat to be critcal about
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I like tht first one looks almost photo like of the aftermath of a clan war very kinda of brutal yet touching and great artwork on it
I like tht second one reminds me very muhc of sort of 60's popart type stuff whihc is all gd in my opion
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Good layout in gneral with what as far as i can see are multiple merged images for the background
good colour choice also, not that many sigs are that kind of colour they tend to be dominated by greens blues and greys from wat I seen
Like the simplictiy of it althouhg I must say the text is a tad hard to read, I think due to the fact it blurs slightly with the image
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Hi paw claw ;)
I like this style its kinda like patchwork, you should do another 8/10 for a first one though :shock:
Thanks, I know I can do better next time as I got the hang of it by the end, like when I put the clouds and 3 rock clusters in I juts drew splodges then knew where to shade easily where as start with bit labourious and slow
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Its good, but could by improved by what the other people said. Now I need to go pass out from seeing pixels *note to self nvr make make an entire pixel sig without breaks again*
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Just uploaded the finished thing for opninons so i can perfect it
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My system is being weird atm It won't upload to my webspcae where it has vanished from and image shack won't take it either. I'm gonna try restarting then I'll try to upload again
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Ok I uploaded it again, i think the guy is pretty muhc finished now
I now the cape veret etc seem to have vanished but they will be visble once the backgrounds put on
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I am leaving the sky til last to make sure I get it right
I know the line work is messy atm, but I am kind of cleaning it up as I sahde an area and intend to colour over the lines when I'm done
I am goinng to remove the path near the front to get rid of alot of the b&w ness of it as with the robes dun I can see it won't be gd with that there. But i'm gonna make sure I use alot of brightish greens and blues to avoid it being to dull
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thats very nice for a first one, maybe a dark red color for the robe
8.5/10 for ur first, its very nice
Yay I'm so happy tht i actualy did gd, I gonna upload again cuz i dun alot more now on the guy
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Ok so I've moved the belt up as far as possible, shrunk the sun, tweaked the sky colours, added grass texture, put in some vines on the weird temple, added some birds in the sky so here it is:
If you can find anything else about it that could be altered don't hesitate to say
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looks like a 10-20 min sketch shadings poor axe looks flat and paper thin needs work honestly
The idea of this place is to give constructive cirtisms not to just be out right rude. And you have to bear in mind that due to the light inesity used to scan images some of the colour variations are lost making the shading to appear to be more one coloured than it truely is
Anyway, I have done some more tweaking latness version will be in the first post shortly.
I know I ain't the best artists in the world, but I think I have covered pretty muhc all the comments peopl have said now and can't psot anything obvious to make it better
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This would of been better suited in the hlep and advice forum
a sig is a signature
In online terms this is a banner like image that appears at the bottom of your forum posts
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but I must agree with wat a tip.it global mod said the Not ___ Fan one or any other ones shouldn't be allwoed as that is very rude
I thought it was kinda funny and was tempted to put it in my sig, until gsw told me I couldn't :(
I konw you don't, but others might. I also personally wouldn't care bout it if anyone made a Not fan one for my name, cuz I dun really care wat people think of me.
but others could do whihc is where the problems would lie with it. Anyway me thinks I gonna try to makemyself a sig now, thts if i can keep my attention on 1 thing for more than 1 min =P
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Very nice, I would have to agree with an earlier poster about it needs a cloud or 2
but the colours and style are very good
the animations are good you see them, but you don;t at first realise as it were they are animations.
Man the more i browse this forum the more I wanna finally find time to try and turn my imaging and pixel skills to make a sig or two
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When I do animations I use JASC Animation Shop, but thats one you have to buy and I mainly use it as it is integrated with JASC Paint Shop Pro whihc is use
but the results are pretty good, you can see for yourself here:
http://runeobsession.xoopiter.com
On the intro page u roll over my website logo and it shows an nice animation, not a complex one but still shows what you can do
my first try at digital painting
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you seem to have go the essentials for the shape and shading, just need to add some deeper shadow tones, some birghter highlight tones and alter tones so they dun have such big jumps between tones. aka instead of like under eyes dark onto light do dark then put bit plaer round tht. then another plaer bit then the light tone so it blends together