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jster4260

First Pixel Sig (WIP) - Updated 9/28/07!

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Ive been working on this pixel and i need some help on what to do for the background

 

 

 

Here's the main character (whip is supposed to be extended foreward as if it was being used to attack):

 

 

 

 

 

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Updated Character: Re-did legs (still not sure about size) and i still need to do arms and head

 

 

 

rurglinecolor2sample.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

And here's a background i was working on. I don't know if i should continue with this one or what, that's why i need suggestions on what would look good.

 

 

 

 

 

rurgbg1sample.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

Hurray! Updated Background! Gave it more Texture and Changed the Color for less Contrast:

 

 

 

 

 

rurgbg1sample2.jpg

 

 

 

Give me C/C on the new versions please.

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU RUINED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY IN GODS NAME DID YOU SAVE IT AS JPEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you need to start over dude......now it sucks. see all the fuzzy stuff around it? thats bad and wil nearly take forever to fix


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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU RUINED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY IN GODS NAME DID YOU SAVE IT AS JPEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you need to start over dude......now it sucks. see all the fuzzy stuff around it? thats bad and wil nearly take forever to fix

 

 

 

Exactly. -.-

 

Besides that.. The human anatomy is completely off, the torso is to big compared to the rest of his body.. The wep's misshapen.. The left arm's muscles are overdone,, and the heads to small.. The legs are a bit toothpivky, you need to flesh them out..

 

 

 

Overall, I'd say this was only TWO microsoft points out of FIVE..


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Thats pretty good for a first.

 

I'd say you need to work on human anatomy mainly.

 

And just perspective for that matter.

 

 

 

But its still pretty good for a first.


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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU RUINED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY IN GODS NAME DID YOU SAVE IT AS JPEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you need to start over dude......now it sucks. see all the fuzzy stuff around it? thats bad and wil nearly take forever to fix

 

Click on it.


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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU RUINED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY IN GODS NAME DID YOU SAVE IT AS JPEG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you need to start over dude......now it sucks. see all the fuzzy stuff around it? thats bad and wil nearly take forever to fix

 

No need to get so crazy, I'm sure he has it saved somewhere else as better quality (note the big SAMPLE written across the image.)

 

 

 

I like the two of your works. Maybe just work on the legs a little bit on the guy but it's a great effort for your first pixel.

 

 

 

The background is also nice as well. You've done a great job on the grass but maybe just work on the texturing of the hills a little more since they're in great contrast from the foreground at the moment.

 

 

 

Nice work so far hope we can see a finished product soon :)


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ty to all those that helped

 

 

 

oh, and its saved as a png, just click on it and it looks fine

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:-# woops my bad dude :) sorry.


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Its quiet nice, no suggestions :D


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well the only thing that needs to be fixed as of now is the guys anatomy

 

i actually suggest just keeping it and shading more


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At the moment i can't really see the full form of the muffin.

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Liking the perspective of the whip =D>

 

 

 

Keep going


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Shield is too small and a bit on wrong perspective, legs are too short and thin, feets are too "fat", torso is too big and arms are a bit oversized. Yes, it is still a WIP, but needs some fixing on those parts.

 

 

 

Shading is ok, and the background looks quite good actually. Just need to add few more colors between the darkest and brightest part there.

 

 

 

It's coming out nicely for the first one, don't do the mistake that most people do, and try to rush it ready. Instead of getting it done fast, don't finish it until you're satisfied it yourself. Hope I helped even a bit. ;)

 

 

 

Good luck, and as I said keep going and I'm looking forward to see more updates. =D>

 

 

 

Rating comes when it's finished.


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these tips are really help full. ty again. ill try and work on the things you guys stated either tonight or tomorrow (My Birthday!! :thumbsup: )

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these tips are really help full. ty again. ill try and work on the things you guys stated either tonight or tomorrow (My Birthday!! :thumbsup: )

 

 

 

Congratsulations! ;)

 

 

 

I can try to make you a edit what I mean with the anatomy errors and such, tomorow if I have time.


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these tips are really help full. ty again. ill try and work on the things you guys stated either tonight or tomorrow (My Birthday!! :thumbsup: )

 

 

 

Congratsulations! ;)

 

 

 

I can try to make you a edit what I mean with the anatomy errors and such, tomorow if I have time.

 

 

 

Wow! That'd be great! Thanks!

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Please give me more feedback on the updated versions. Im not sure i did a good job editing the guys legs and i think theyre too big :?

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Ok, I made you a fast edit on how things should be. This might not be 100% correct cause I made it quite fast. ÃÆââ¬Å¡ÃâôBut anyway, hope you get what I mean.

 

 

 

Btw, your shading is pretty good.

 

 

 

Unluckily imageshack is not letting me to upload it so I'll have to wait a while. #-o

 

 

 

Ok here it is, fast edit. ;)

 

 

 

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