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The Lords of Life


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Based of "The Lords of Helm's Deep", I have made another series to follow the story-line.

 

The SERIES is up!

 

Summary of 3 other parts below.

 

 

 

PART 1~~

 

3 Brothers; Elgost, Hadhood, Bethrone

 

Split up

 

War in Midsts

 

Run into each other

 

Wage a war against Brady, a super evil demonic-like ruler

 

They lose; and retreat

 

 

 

PART 2~~

 

Brothers find refugee at Gandalf's secret, underground, alchemey area

 

Brady finds them

 

Long speech; coming from Gandalf

 

Brady gets tired of hearing him; so electricutes him

 

Brothers charge

 

 

 

PART 3~~

 

Brady dissaperates before being attacked

 

Brothers travel seeking another town; florida

 

Recruit an army of 200

 

See Brady in horizon; 20 million ork, and oryki

 

Charging after him; 200 million Dwarves + Elves

 

 

 

SERIES 2~~

 

Lords of Life

 

 

 

Part 1

 

Brady's army marched forward, chasing behind him the millions of Elves, and Dwarves. Elgost realized that - then, right there, that

 

this wasn't going to be war, it would be slaughter. So, as hard as it would be to leave, after all of the brothers' efforts, Elgost warned his brothers, of the realization of the very likely outcome of this battle. Now the three brothers abandoned the idea of fighting the HUGE army of Brady's, and left the several hundred soldiers to fight for themselves, and the Elves and Dwarves.

 

 

 

Without the thought of turning back, knowing that, even though the Elves, and Dwarves outnumbered Brady's Army, by about 100 million, the brothers knew that Brady alone could wipe out an army of several million, and with the brute force of ork, and orikyi the enemies of the massive army might as well kill thereselves on the spot, the brothers fled to the old hideout of the deceased wizard, gandalf, as that was the only place they could go.

 

 

 

Checking outside of the cave entrance, to see what was happening, was the only thing they did for the next two days, except eat, and drink; no sleep for them, as in minutes all of them could be dead; for who knows why. All the time none of the brothers spoke, and the only noise was the war cries, and the occasional caugh, or wheeze from the brothers. They were all becoming SO drowzy that not even the explosions of near bombs would catch them up.

 

 

 

"Wait, bombs... That means... COVENANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Cried Elgost, and with that vocalization the other two brothers were awake.

 

"What? Coven- Oh... Uh-oh..." And the other two brothers realized it was THAT covenant. Now it was a war for America, Earth, Freedom, and the war was between The Covenant, now Brady's ENTIRE army, and the dwarves, and elves.

 

 

 

Elgost - "Oh we are so scewed."

 

Bethrone - "Yep."

 

Hadhood - "God damn. I hate the guy who is writing this."

so i herd u liek mudkips.

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Dont Advertise for your story in another thread, even though it is your own thread.

 

Also, usually people post the first part of a story, not just that your are writing it.

 

And last, but not least... PLEASE don't bump a really old thread (I'm not saying you did. I'm talking to who ever else reads this) If the story isn't on the first 2 pages, OR has been a month and a half without a post, DON'T BUMP

 

 

 

 

 

And, now my real last thing... I could not read that other story, I even tried reading around it. There was just too much. It was like the movie 300, and the words were the 300.

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My opinion: Fanciful gibberish that doesn't warrant a second go.

 

 

 

Oh yes and your story is 11 months old.

 

 

 

Please write something else.

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I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!

It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?

Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.

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Dont Advertise for your story in another thread, even though it is your own thread.

 

Also, usually people post the first part of a story, not just that your are writing it.

 

And last, but not least... PLEASE don't bump a really old thread (I'm not saying you did. I'm talking to who ever else reads this) If the story isn't on the first 2 pages, OR has been a month and a half without a post, DON'T BUMP

 

 

 

 

 

And, now my real last thing... I could not read that other story, I even tried reading around it. There was just too much. It was like the movie 300, and the words were the 300.

 

 

 

Mm'kai, understand what you mean.

 

Tbh I wasn't really trying to bump it, but show the history before this, but seeing as it isn't the JavaScript on my labtop, I will remove the link, and give a main summary here.

 

 

 

Thank you for (somewhat/slightly) flaming me, and proving to me, that no one whants to read a 10 month old topic ::'

 

 

[keep it clean - mrmyk]

so i herd u liek mudkips.

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