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I don't drink coffee.

 

 

 

Sorry for my absence. Real life is incredibly busy, and I've got more important things to do. (rather be here though, believe me!)

 

 

 

I do write intermittedly, I've got a character who I might introduce, but I am unsure of how to do it... or even whether to do it at all, but I've decided. I mean, Dracon has to get with the rebels somehow? Oh wait... was that a spoiler?

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: Also, I'm adding something you might enjoy: part of a day of guard training! But I am not finished with the chapter just yet...

 

 

 

ahhh... I've ruined my "1337" post count.

 

0MG! NO7 7H3 1337!

 

Translation: OMG! Not the Leet!

 

 

 

Oh, and thanks for the spoiler...

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Yeah, I know I could have done it better, but I've been busy... this may be your last chapter for a while. Sorry. 12 days! (until college! Missouri University of Science and Technology baby! I'll come out of there a very wanted man, you know what I mean?)

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Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.

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I'm sorry everyone... the chapter wasn't awesome...

 

 

 

So I'll give you this! (Don't worry, the link is safe. I am very cautious with these things!)

 

 

 

http://xkcd.com/254/

 

 

 

isn't that just too awesome?

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I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!

It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?

Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.

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You guys have no pride. I didn't even beg once. In fact, higher levels begged from ME...

 

 

 

I usually never beg, I was talking about in real Life I'd do that.

 

 

 

... -.- even I have a better grip on reality than that.

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I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!

It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?

Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.

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You guys have no pride. I didn't even beg once. In fact, higher levels begged from ME...

 

 

 

I usually never beg, I was talking about in real Life I'd do that.

 

 

 

... -.- even I have a better grip on reality than that.

 

 

 

Haha, I don't :lol:

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MOAR!

 

 

 

It's past Sunday, a week and a day past the Sunday you speak of, so where's this update?

 

 

 

My first word tells it all. I can just suggest some general revision and proofreading to improve the flow of the story, but other than that I have no problem with it.

 

 

 

I must admit that I dislike the snails-pace update rate of the Varrock Library, or at least for the stuff I deem worthy of reading. I guess it's worth the wait though =P~ And since I only come here once in a blue moon, I have lots of the older stuff to delve into. The only thing I would consider trying to pass off as a piece of literature would be a couple poems that were the result of two school projects.

There's no such thing as regret. A regret means you are unhappy with the person you are now,

and if you're unhappy with the person you are, you change yourself. That

regret will no longer be a regret, because it will help to form the new,

better you. So really, a regret isn't a regret.

It's experience.

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MOAR!

 

 

 

It's past Sunday, a week and a day past the Sunday you speak of, so where's this update?

 

 

 

My first word tells it all. I can just suggest some general revision and proofreading to improve the flow of the story, but other than that I have no problem with it.

 

 

 

I must admit that I dislike the snails-pace update rate of the Varrock Library, or at least for the stuff I deem worthy of reading. I guess it's worth the wait though =P~ And since I only come here once in a blue moon, I have lots of the older stuff to delve into. The only thing I would consider trying to pass off as a piece of literature would be a couple poems that were the result of two school projects.

 

 

 

People have things to do, Falador Libraries to see, and some have school starting. All will take time away from here

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MOAR!

 

 

 

It's past Sunday, a week and a day past the Sunday you speak of, so where's this update?

 

 

 

My first word tells it all. I can just suggest some general revision and proofreading to improve the flow of the story, but other than that I have no problem with it.

 

 

 

I must admit that I dislike the snails-pace update rate of the Varrock Library, or at least for the stuff I deem worthy of reading. I guess it's worth the wait though =P~ And since I only come here once in a blue moon, I have lots of the older stuff to delve into. The only thing I would consider trying to pass off as a piece of literature would be a couple poems that were the result of two school projects.

 

 

 

People have things to do, Falador Libraries to see, and some have school starting. All will take time away from here

 

I know, I still don't like it.

There's no such thing as regret. A regret means you are unhappy with the person you are now,

and if you're unhappy with the person you are, you change yourself. That

regret will no longer be a regret, because it will help to form the new,

better you. So really, a regret isn't a regret.

It's experience.

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I like reading, might drop by every once in a while, but role-playing doesn't appeal to me.

There's no such thing as regret. A regret means you are unhappy with the person you are now,

and if you're unhappy with the person you are, you change yourself. That

regret will no longer be a regret, because it will help to form the new,

better you. So really, a regret isn't a regret.

It's experience.

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I like reading, might drop by every once in a while, but role-playing doesn't appeal to me.

 

 

 

 

 

Lol same for me :P I prefer writing and reading whereas role-playing really doesn't spark my attention. Nice writing Xewleer :P I misses you!! Lol anyyyyywwaaayys I really should get back to my own writing :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

~ Lady Chey

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Don't worry... I'm still here.

 

 

 

College is hard to adjust to, but I am having too much fun for my own good... But hey...

 

 

 

I am working on the story, but I am retconning the latest chapter. Mai does not exist. She never existed.

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I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!

It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?

Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.

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