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Hey guys! Less than a week before I start college. I am really busy! I'll update if I have a free day.




Woo, a semi-update maybe!!!!

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Sorry. But I should have free time Sunday.
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Sorry. But I should have free time Sunday.




Sounds good :thumbsup:

Oh, and let me rephrase my cheer now...

YAY A MAYBE UPDATE ON SUNDAY!!!

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MOAR!



It's past Sunday, a week and a day past the Sunday you speak of, so where's this update?



My first word tells it all. I can just suggest some general revision and proofreading to improve the flow of the story, but other than that I have no problem with it.



I must admit that I dislike the snails-pace update rate of the Varrock Library, or at least for the stuff I deem worthy of reading. I guess it's worth the wait though =P~ And since I only come here once in a blue moon, I have lots of the older stuff to delve into. The only thing I would consider trying to pass off as a piece of literature would be a couple poems that were the result of two school projects.

There's no such thing as regret. A regret means you are unhappy with the person you are now,
and if you're unhappy with the person you are, you change yourself. That
regret will no longer be a regret, because it will help to form the new,
better you. So really, a regret isn't a regret.
It's experience.


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MOAR!



It's past Sunday, a week and a day past the Sunday you speak of, so where's this update?



My first word tells it all. I can just suggest some general revision and proofreading to improve the flow of the story, but other than that I have no problem with it.



I must admit that I dislike the snails-pace update rate of the Varrock Library, or at least for the stuff I deem worthy of reading. I guess it's worth the wait though =P~ And since I only come here once in a blue moon, I have lots of the older stuff to delve into. The only thing I would consider trying to pass off as a piece of literature would be a couple poems that were the result of two school projects.




People have things to do, Falador Libraries to see, and some have school starting. All will take time away from here

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MOAR!



It's past Sunday, a week and a day past the Sunday you speak of, so where's this update?



My first word tells it all. I can just suggest some general revision and proofreading to improve the flow of the story, but other than that I have no problem with it.



I must admit that I dislike the snails-pace update rate of the Varrock Library, or at least for the stuff I deem worthy of reading. I guess it's worth the wait though =P~ And since I only come here once in a blue moon, I have lots of the older stuff to delve into. The only thing I would consider trying to pass off as a piece of literature would be a couple poems that were the result of two school projects.




People have things to do, Falador Libraries to see, and some have school starting. All will take time away from here


I know, I still don't like it.

There's no such thing as regret. A regret means you are unhappy with the person you are now,
and if you're unhappy with the person you are, you change yourself. That
regret will no longer be a regret, because it will help to form the new,
better you. So really, a regret isn't a regret.
It's experience.


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You should go join the Fally Library. Link in mah sig. And I do love this story Xe, you should please continue it at some point. :<img src=:' />

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I like reading, might drop by every once in a while, but role-playing doesn't appeal to me.

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and if you're unhappy with the person you are, you change yourself. That
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It's experience.


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I like reading, might drop by every once in a while, but role-playing doesn't appeal to me.






Lol same for me :P I prefer writing and reading whereas role-playing really doesn't spark my attention. Nice writing Xewleer :P I misses you!! Lol anyyyyywwaaayys I really should get back to my own writing :)







~ Lady Chey


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Don't worry... I'm still here.



College is hard to adjust to, but I am having too much fun for my own good... But hey...



I am working on the story, but I am retconning the latest chapter. Mai does not exist. She never existed.
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College is hard to adjust to, but I am having too much fun for my own good... But hey...




Just dont get arrested...

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They can't...



IF IT'S THE PERFECT CRIME!!! HA HA HA HA HA!!!
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Chapter 5



Troy couldn't move. Bouncing on the back of his enemy while he chatted up Lucrecia was unforgivable. Troy practically went mad, or, at least, lost a few more marbles out of his small bag. But he was able to calm himself when they were almost through the run to the town and listen to what they were talking about, maybe he would find some kind of weakness. But first, a look around his surroundings. They were running at a fast clip down the final hills on the approach to the town. This weakness of Troy's was unforgivable, he would have to learn to control his emotions!



But there was nothing really to learn! It was all: What do you think of such and such? And other chit chat that had no value. Eventually, Troy gave up and went to sleep.



Dracon and Lucrecia kept running. They were not hampered by Troy, who bounced on Dracon's back, and Lucrecia could run well enough to keep up with Dracon. She marveled a little at his strength. He didn't seem to tire, despite apparently having a race with her brother and fighting a boss by himself. She really liked him, and not just because he saved her either. He was powerful, handsome, a good conversationalist. BUT, she told herself, she had to wait to see if he was a truly good person, otherwise it might be a bad relationship.



The town was of middle size and property value. Known for hot springs that were famous for rejuvenatory and relaxing qualities that didn't have a match for some four hundred miles. Dracon had, intermittently, many friends to depend upon, though, he had not been in touch with most of them for two years. He hefted Troy to a much more secure position on his back and walked into town with Lucrecia by him.



Special Side Story: Guard training! Part 1.



Inside the Black Master's Castle's Legion training area. Some twenty students have applied, and succeeded, to reach candidacy for Legion of Terror Troopers. The instructor has a vest on that says: 'Old Master'. He is demonstrating various weapons and armors from the chests next to him.



"Gentleman this is a gun. It shoots bullets, crossbow bolts, heck, anything you care to stick in that won't gum it up." There were a couple snickers at the instructor. But most were serious. "And this is not how you use it." With a sudden movement, he pistol whipped the nearest snickerer, bringing him down hard. "Anyone seen using this kind of weapon for melee combat will be shot, perhaps even with your own weapon, when the mission is over. Exceptions are rare, but not unheard of." He rummaged through a nearby chest and brought out a medium sized broadsword.



"No matter what your specialty is, you will all be expected to be at least proficient with this blade, the medium broadsword. Who hear has some skill with this blade?" A few stepped forward, he picked the one closest to him. "Mind fighting me?"



The student was wary; he knew that the old man in front of him would probably defeat him, so he should use his best move straight away. It was a very good move, slashing down to up across the shoulders, it was a strike extremely hard to counter, but the old man did it. "Actually, that wasn't too bad. I'll watch your progress with great interest." This was his highest compliment. "But there are still many who are stronger!" He seemed to make a casual slice, but the skilled student didn't seem to be able to catch it. The top layer of his shirt, without touching his actual skin.



"Now, let us take a tour of this facility." He led them inside. They now had a great respect for him, including the one who he just defeated. "You are expected to memorize the entire layout, so you can quickly get from place to place. You needn't worry though, every corridor is straight, and, when possible, the corners are right angles. The Ventilation shafts are very wide, but thin, no one can crawl through. Also, the only points of entry are ones we can't currently conceive of or are purposefully left open for... enjoyment purposes..."



"Sir? Why would he leave open openings to let threats enter?" This was the swordsman, he was walking in the front, but it was obvious that the others were resenting him for his attitude. "It makes no sense to me."



The instructor nodded. At least this candidate was thinking practically. "True. But then if there are known flaws, rebels will gather to them. It is easy to figure out who is a rebel and who is not by who is invading your castle, eh?" They came to a cafeteria like room. There were a few guards lounging between shifts, they sat either alone or together in small groups. One of the more cavalier ones rose up. As they entered, a waitress, nice looking but with an underlying feel of toughness, she was delivering a large basin of fruit salad to some eager guards with bowls and spoons. They tipped her, then tucked into the dish with relish.



"Hey! Newbies! Hey young ones!" This guard was a lieutenant. He had a jaunty look and leaned on his sword and gun with the ease of someone who is completely secure in his power and place. "Hope the old master tells you why we are so much..." He struck a 'noble' pose. "COOLER THAN THOU!!!"



"One of my failed students. But a good soldier none-the-less." The Old master deflated him with a swift knee to the ribs. "Now then..." His hand gestured at the cafeteria. "This the Guards eating area. You will have energy bars with you on all your duties, but if you are hungry, come here for a free, healthy snack. The girls here are just as deadly, if not more so, than you are. Flirt at your own risk."



He walked on. There was a man talking to one of the guards at a desk. They were working out shifts, if what they could hear was any indication. "The Black Master has a flex time system in place. Guards, if they are feeling bad or tired, can opt out for a shift to rest or get some medicine. Then, they can choose another shift to make up for the one they missed."



End: Part 1, Guard training! A special look into the workings of the Legion of Terror!





Just updating the CANON of my story. Do not accept substitutes.
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Espext sam AhpDatees LAHtersz.



hAh mezshahage phRam ZueLeear.



(Try to pronounce it. It sounds cool. Expect an update somewhere around Labor day)
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Espext sam AhpDatees LAHtersz.



hAh mezshahage phRam ZueLeear.



(Try to pronounce it. It sounds cool. Expect an update somewhere around Labor day)




Or, in Blue Jay's English:



Expect some updates later.

A Message from Xewleer.



That took me a while to figure it out #-o



O :o I be a Varrock Guard now :shock: :o :shock: :o

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Hurah for updatez!!! As once again, Xewleer writes an awesome story! \<img src=/' />

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I am writing something, but I'm not happy with it. I'm going to write something else, then come back to this. Refreshing yourself is an excellent writing technique.
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I am writing something, but I'm not happy with it. I'm going to write something else, then come back to this. Refreshing yourself is an excellent writing technique.




It is.

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Chapter 5, continued.



He was met by a guard. "Hey! Money for passing the gate unharmed!" He said, leering into Dracon's eyes. "Three... probly want sum medical attention for your friend there... Fifteen Villeins" He looked down at Lucrecia, who stared him straight in the eyes. "And a kiss from the pretty one!" Troy began to wake up.



"How about a kiss of death!!" He cried, leaping from Dracon's back. He flew through the air, around the dimwitted guard and kicked him in the back of the head. "You don't screw with my sister!" He yelled before collapsing. Dracon picked him up while the other guards were still speechless. Lucrecia was in a state of semi-funk, it wasn't everyday you see your baby brother leap ten feet in the air and drop kick someone.



"Poor guy... still delirious... Let's go, Lucrecia!" He grabbed her hand and ran off into the streets, as the guards ran after them, shouting. Eventually, they out ran them in fine style. "You awake, Troy?" A muffled curse answered him. "Muscles still wasted then... Heh heh... you are soooo in my power still... Come on Lucrecia! Let us run together, off the beaten path, where we will bound over rocks and boulders and down a waterfall!"



Lucrecia blushed, then scolded him for taking advantage of her brother's sickness. "I don't have to put up with this, you know!" Troy groaned as he slid off Dracon's back and walked down the ally. He counted the doors until he reached the entrance of a bar. He knocked loudly. Having no answer, he roughly kicked the door down. Walking in, he was followed by a surprised pair of companions. The bartender didn't say anything, and a man in a carpenter's uniform quietly repaired the door. "Three waters. No alcohol, my body might not be able to take it."



He breathed heavily. This excursion was causing him to sweat heavily. His body had barely healed, much less regained it's energy from running around in the volcano dungeon. Lucrecia checked his pulse, very heavy, but slow. "You shouldn't push yourself like this... it really isn't healthy. I mean, I really don't like seeing by human younger brother destroy himself through pushing." He didn't respond to that.



The next character came in, kicking the door down as well. "MY! Them monkeys our shur making messes of them jocuzis!" The unusual character, who wore thick clothes, so it was impossible to tell whether male or female. It was completely covered in bandages, scarves and afghans of varying natures and colors, even the eyes were covered, though it did not seem blind. "The moon recently called a moot! WOOT! I killed an kingcrab... delish!"



"Alex... shut up... I don't want to deal with your foolery." Troy glared out of half closed eyes. Dracon and Lucrecia had moved away. Obviously, some kind of meeting was going to happen, and they didn't want to get involved.



"Alex... isn't that a boy's name? Couldn't tell otherwise." Dracon casually said to Lucrecia, he had hoped that Troy couldn't hear, but Troy always has an ear cocked towards Dracon.



"Alex is how he introduced himself to us. Alex could stand for Alexandra or Alexander. Do not interfere with the people hear, they will kill you."



"Opening operah ought olways operation ostentatiously!!!"



"SHUT UP!"



"Monkeys screaming curses lick your body like a popsicle!"



"Eat shoe!" Troy leaped up and tried to kick Alex in the chest.



"Drink popcorn!" Alex dodged and brought out a dagger from the voluminous folds of his clothes.



"Now now! Gentleman and... whatever you are... stop this at once! <3" Said an incredibly cheery voice. Lucrecia jumped with surprise, but Dracon had noticed her standing next to them, hidden in shadows. A half-elf released whatever camouflage she was using and joined them. She had a stern, but cheerful look on her face, she didn't look very laid back though. Once they had calmed down, "Alright I'll stop." "Wild hippos jigging mozart!", she turned to Lucrecia and Dracon.



"You must be Lucrecia, and I already know you! You're...! <3" Still getting that strange cheery note in, she was interrupted by Dracon.



"I'm known as Douglas." He said, deadpan expression set in his face. "Nice to meet you...?"



"Christina! Douglas." She paused for a moment, then a radiant smile lit her face. "<3"



Lucrecia, who had been worrying over Troy, decided to forget about it and enjoy the mood. "Know anyone here? Mr. Thousand years? Or perhaps your name is a dead give away, Douglas?" She said, with a smile. Douglas was old, obviously he had to have changed his name several times! "Perhaps you came here to look for a friend?"



"I came here because it seemed, at the time, that Troy needed medical assistance... BUT HE'S FINE NOW, ISN'T HE?!?!?" He threw a cup at Troy's head, which rebounded with a dull clonk. Troy was too busy arguing with Alex again to notice. The door was kicked in another time, this time, by a man in military dress. He was not in the least intimidating, though.



"My My My, I was following a rebel... and what do I find, a cache of rebels? Isn't this my lucky day?" He said through a smiling, barely open mouth. "Please please please come quietly, I don't want to destroy this whole neighborhood!" He was grinning properly, a fine slasher smile. "Cause Cause Cause I've given orders to my men... kill everyone in the vicinity should I not walk out with you. You You You know what? They They They will do it!" He motioned and police warriors started to file in.



"Guys... I think the best thing right now is to trust Dr...ouglas. <3" Christina said, without hesitation. Troy was the only one surprised. He spasmed for a moment or two, but he calmed down and let himself be taken away, grumbling about killing them all.



"Viva killjoy penguins popsicling meth!"



"Shut up!"



"Stop him! No rebels are to die until the public execution!"
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Very well waited for :D




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