Recent Signatures

[wurmskin]

I made these three tonight, and its the first time I've actually posted here with some material so please don't eat me :lol: .

 

 

 

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I only started three weeks ago, and I will really appreciate any type of constructive criticism as I definitely want to improve : .

[Laxaria]

First one

 

 

 

I like the composition. However, the text on the top left is too "white" and it is stealing something away from the focal. It needs some lighting and some more depth.

 

 

 

The weird C4D on the right seems to be cutting her arm, so fix that perhaps?

 

 

 

Second one

 

 

 

The smudging on the bottom is much too messy and much too distracting. The orange thing on the left needs to be either smudged out more or faded out a little bit. As it is brighter than the focal, it seems to be stealing some of the focal.

 

 

 

The text... Im not good at text placement at all, but it doesn't contribute much to the overal composition of the sig.

 

 

 

Third one

 

 

 

Don't really like the text. It is also very messy.

[wurmskin]

Thanks, I'll edit the main post and all the sigs with your input soon :) .

[r4ngewarlord]

i might not be much of a artist but i personally think the current copy of the second one looks a bit empty.

 

just my opinion...