Promise Posted April 12, 2009 Share Posted April 12, 2009 V2 Any advice on how to make it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted April 12, 2009 Share Posted April 12, 2009 Get rid of the text, make the border solid black, take whatever you used on the face off, it looks terrible. The face should be the focal... But the effects are amazing. Maybe try cropping the canvas? My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted April 12, 2009 Share Posted April 12, 2009 Get rid of the text, make the border solid black, Maybe try cropping the canvas? Brighten his face a little bit, it's really dark at the moment which makes it hard to see any detail. I'd chop off a pretty big part of the blackness on one of the sides too, that way the focal won't be in the dead centre of the canvas any more. Other than that, it looks pretty good. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElkNight Posted April 12, 2009 Share Posted April 12, 2009 Get rid of the text. 8,180WONGTONG IS THE BEST AND IS MORE SUPERIOR THAN ME#1 Wongtong stalker.Im looking for some No Limit soldiers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Promise Posted April 12, 2009 Author Share Posted April 12, 2009 I'll try to brighten it, but his mask has a visor on it, which already makes half of the face mask a solid black. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
malo2 Posted April 13, 2009 Share Posted April 13, 2009 Too much contrast Lastfm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted April 13, 2009 Share Posted April 13, 2009 Too much black space really. It's a pretty bad habit to have both sides completely black. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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