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^ sorry on that comic was [developmentally delayed]ed, atleast the OP's comic made me luagh

OMG OMG SAILING IS COMING LOLOLOLOL!!!1111 b/c JAGEX GAMES STUDIO , ANAGRAM OF SAITO JUDGE X-GAMES

TAKASHI SAITO= RED SOX P1TCHER... RED SOX = BOSTON, BOSTON = PORT CITY!!!! PORT CITY = SAILING


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I don't know about the rest of you people, but I thought it was amusing :<img src=:' />



If eventually do want to start making them in a better quality, with a better program, you can use GraphicsGale

I've used it, and it's a pretty good program for things like this

Here's the link for a free download.

http://www.humanbalance.net/gale/us/

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Hey, it's all about the presentation.



*fifteen minutes later*



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See, even with the most slapdash of efforts, you can be a bit funny.



Hint: The joke is that the newbie is left-handed.






I like that one. :thumbsup:

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its not funny, the drawing is shoddy. you obviously have little to no talent, so dont kid yourself




And making me feel bad will accomplish what? You sound like a troll.

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its not funny, the drawing is shoddy. you obviously have little to no talent, so dont kid yourself




And making me feel bad will accomplish what? You sound like a troll.




Don't be mad just because a person is honest. In my opinion, your comic wasn't at all funny. Go practice drawing some more before you post another next time.
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Tbh, it looks like it took a beer and 5 minutes to make. Perhaps you could use something more then paint and spend time on it. You should make something distinctive about the characters so that they develop a personality overtime.



Sorry if I sound harsh, but you asked for constructive criticism.

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Not an amazing start, but things can get better I'm sure :)



Also please... the graphics designer in me cries at the sight of MS Paint stickfigures :cry: :cry: If you can, try get hold of ANY other graphics program! One with anti-aliasing!! :cry: I do believe Gimp is a free program though I've never used it.




Welcome to CheapScape. :roll:


I use Paint Shop Pro 9 and I can't afford programs myself really :( :(

Not that I am trying to endorse 'alternative' downloads at all.



There are alternatives out there than PSP/PS that are free, just Google it. You'd be surprised how much good software you can get that is freeware.



Good luck with the comic though! I'd like to see more ^_^


:!: wow ive :wall: never seen so many :cry: smileys =P~ on one post =D>
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Tbh, it looks like it took a beer and 5 minutes to make. Perhaps you could use something more then paint and spend time on it. You should make something distinctive about the characters so that they develop a personality overtime.



Sorry if I sound harsh, but you asked for constructive criticism.




Well, it really depends on what he's aiming for. Perhaps there will be permanent characters with ongoing stories later on, but throwaway people with cheap gags doesn't hurt starting out.

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Oh boy, I should show this to Nadril.



Work on your drawing and your humor. It wasn't funny at all and it was ugly. And don't even try calling me a troll, 'cause I'm just telling you how it is. Besides, making comics about runescape that are actually good isn't very easy at all.
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wtf paint

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Oh boy, I should show this to Nadril.



Work on your drawing and your humor. It wasn't funny at all and it was ugly. And don't even try calling me a troll, 'cause I'm just telling you how it is. Besides, making comics about runescape that are actually good isn't very easy at all.




Imagine mixing Cyanide and Happiness-style Comics with Runescape based material :twss:



Also, to OP, if you have a scanner, try drawing your images and importing them onto your computer. You can download Gimp to edit your images.

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Oh boy, I should show this to Nadril.



Work on your drawing and your humor. It wasn't funny at all and it was ugly. And don't even try calling me a troll, 'cause I'm just telling you how it is. Besides, making comics about runescape that are actually good isn't very easy at all.




Imagine mixing Cyanide and Happiness-style Comics with Runescape based material :twss:



Also, to OP, if you have a scanner, try drawing your images and importing them onto your computer. You can download Gimp to edit your images.


What do you mean by Cyanide and Happiness-style? Just the cleanliness of the art or the humor? Because the humor really isn't that great anymore, most of them are just recycling jokes. Or making new ones that are bad.
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Hint: The joke is that the newbie is left-handed.




Oh dude, I actually loled irl cause of this, thanks xD.



And to the OP, with some better skills, you can actually make funny comics..like that doctor one with the lobster.

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http://dr-lento.deviantart.com/



Here's some good ones. :thumbup:

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Oh boy, I should show this to Nadril.



Work on your drawing and your humor. It wasn't funny at all and it was ugly. And don't even try calling me a troll, 'cause I'm just telling you how it is. Besides, making comics about runescape that are actually good isn't very easy at all.




Imagine mixing Cyanide and Happiness-style Comics with Runescape based material :twss:



Also, to OP, if you have a scanner, try drawing your images and importing them onto your computer. You can download Gimp to edit your images.


What do you mean by Cyanide and Happiness-style? Just the cleanliness of the art or the humor? Because the humor really isn't that great anymore, most of them are just recycling jokes. Or making new ones that are bad.






The older humor...



here's a 30 second paint job of a basic character.



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You can tell the following thing from my quick picture:The character is a bald, black male in blue wizard outfit holding a Zamorak god book and an ancient staff.



There are already too many stick-figure based comics out there. VIOLENCE is the key. JK. But really, you should work on a better visual representation of what you are trying to accomplish. Your line to separate scenes are not straight too.



Here are my steps to creating a comic:

1. Plot

-What is the comic strip about?

2. Script

-What are the characters going to say?

3.Scenery/props/character appearance

-How do you want to visually show your comic?

4.Proof-checking

-Check for graphic/script flaws and anything with issues.



I hope this will help your second release.

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Thank god you posted this in the wrong forum. You would be ripped to bits in the gallery. :wall:

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Wow, I can't believe you folks took that 15 minute scribble (well, it was more like ten) more seriously than my family takes my actual comics.



Anyway, a messy line style doesn't necessarily mean bad structure unless it doesn't make any sense at all. (I'm looking at you, Dresden Codak.) And yeah, the lead up to the punchline was sort of empty. But so was mine! But I usually don't put that much effort into proving a point.

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At least spend a little more than just 10mins on it?
Wongton is better than me in anyway~~

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wtf paint


What's wrong with MS Paint?







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Oh boy, I should show this to Nadril.



Work on your drawing and your humor. It wasn't funny at all and it was ugly. And don't even try calling me a troll, 'cause I'm just telling you how it is. Besides, making comics about runescape that are actually good isn't very easy at all.




The point of critiquing is to be constructive not just flat out insulting, If you were to become a teacher I'll pray for your students' sense of self worth.
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