deskjethp Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 http://www.tip.it/runescape/?page=stealing_creation.htm [hide=Done!]1: Introduction: Grammar: "In the wilderness, just south of the Bounty Hunter Crater, strange phenomena has been occurring." --- 'has' should be changed to 'have.' 2: Introduction: "At the end of the twenty minutes which constitutes a full game, whichever team has the most points wins." --- The game also ends if all sources of Sacred Clay have been exhausted, at which point if there is more than one minute left, the timer drops to 1 minute giving time for people to deposit any remaining clay they have. 3: Sacred Clay: "At first, without any tools, all you can do is gather clay from Level One Clay Fragments. " --- Any class of clay can be obtained without tools, player level allowing, it usually just takes longer to get higher level clay without a tool. 4: Sacred Clay: Spelling: "...(a safe area, which contains a table for dropping off clay or items, a mystic who can show you the amounts and types of clay available, and tables which store any items you team may have dropped off)..." --- "you team may have dropped off" should be "your team may have dropped off" 5: Sacred Clay: "The resources are tied to the skills - a swarm resource requires the use of a butterfly net and is tied to your hunting level, a pool requires a harpoon and the fishing skill, a tree requires a hatchet and woodcutting, and finally mining requires the mining skill and a pickaxe. Not all of these may be present in a game; they appear randomly, so having balanced skill levels is an aid." --- 'requires' should be 'uses' 6: Sacred Clay Equipment: Spelling/Grammar: "Weapon costs 26 Points" should be "Weapons cost 26 points"[/hide] Done. ~SerpentEye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deskjethp Posted July 28, 2009 Author Share Posted July 28, 2009 On a separate note, in the combat guide, where it explains the special ability of the enhanced excalibur, it could also say that the hitpoints are recovered in 5 groups of 4. See http://www.tip.it/runescape/?page=comba ... tm#special Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serpent Eye Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 deskjethp, Thank you so much for your submission! : The spelling/grammar errors have been taken care of. I clarified all other issues concerning what constitues the end of a game, as well as the fact that harvesting clay doesn't require a tool to be used. These changes should appear on the site shortly. We appreciate your help in providing the most accurate (and accurately spelled!) information as possible! :D Thanks, - SerpentEye Crew Note: I'm keeping this topic unlocked for now, as the second post reguarding the Combat Guide/Excalibur hasn't been looked into quite yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokemama Posted August 4, 2009 Share Posted August 4, 2009 enhanced excalibur special in combat guide has been updated. thanks! it's a lot easier to get over yourself when you look at intelligence the same way you look at beauty, or height, or eye color: being smart is easy, but being good is hard ... being smart is handed to you, being good is handed to *nobody*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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