Saru Inc Posted October 5, 2010 Share Posted October 5, 2010 What is this, motivation?My way blows up your central stationBecause we all know the commotionThat my promotions bring careensYour locomotion into the ravine. ill think of morehomework is a chore I have all the 99s, and have been playing since 2001. Comped 4/30/15 My Araxxi Kills: 459::Araxxi Drops(KC):Araxxi Hilts: 4x Eye (14/126/149/459), Web - (100) Fang (193) Araxxi Legs Completed: 5 ---Top (69/206/234/292/361), Middle (163/176/278/343/395), Bottom (135/256/350/359/397)Boss Pets: Supreme - 848 KCIf you play Xbox One - Add me! GT: Urtehnoes - Currently on a Destiny binge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orpheus Posted October 5, 2010 Share Posted October 5, 2010 Look up in the sky, it's a bird it's a plane,It's Niflheim [bleep] and I'm bringing the pain,I'd love to roll some lines in this grill, no lie,But I've got an essay to rap on, goodbye! I was going to eat hot dogs for dinner tonight. I think I will settle for cereal. OPEN WIDE HERE COMES THE HELICOPTER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
das Posted October 6, 2010 Author Share Posted October 6, 2010 I went out to lunchGuess I had a hunchThat Off topic would eat this topic upand be posting on this topic saying "sup"People may be hating on my rhymesif they do it's a crimeBecause my flow is pure, my flow is whackI'm cooler than the duck that goes "Aflac!"Because everywhere I go women throw themselves at meWAIT, not another verse of misogyny. Because I really don't need to rap to make myself look greatI feel like a million bucks - Scratch that - All the oil in KuwaitI see so many peopel talking about homework or EssaysI look back, reflect about those daysPen to a paper solving equations and doing researchThe thought of all those sources makes me lurchA few more things before I signoffNiflheim turn your mic off!Todd I work for your ISPI'm causing your disconnects like Muhammad Ali Just thought you might like to knowI got no limits to how crazy my raps go!I will say i'm shocked it's went 5 pages and not been reportedThats about as rare as an illegal alien not getting deportedBut i'm thankful off topic is able to bust looseand not be prudish and say "the deuce?" Because these haters just don't understandLove ~ Das , Got my start modding clans "Any people anywhere, being inclined and having the power, have the right to rise up, and shake off the existing government, and form a new one that suits them better. This is a most valuable - a most sacred right - a right, which we hope and believe, is to liberate the world."Abraham Lincoln Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rob Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Do I really need to come and show you how it's done?I'm wasting my time here, but I'll stay and watch theI've reading what you're writing, it's all a waste of timeIf i didn't know better, I'd say it was a crime So, come on You know the words, but you ain't got the nervesWhat's this? Oh, you're choking now!Look here, he's choking, downChoking, not a soundHe knows the words but they won't come outYou came out, but how?Get back off the stage and let the pros shell outThe lyrics that you ain't got the strength to sayOr any hint of skill, which you ain't showing todayI'm going easy too, but you gotta go awayAt least one of us has got the nerves to playThe rap game, so you just hide and I'll searchHide well, son, because when you go, it'll be by hearse -------------------------------------- (I can't right very well right now, ill be back with something better later xD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saru Inc Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 I went out to lunchGuess I had a hunchThat Off topic would eat this topic upand be posting on this topic saying "sup"People may be hating on my rhymesif they do it's a crimeBecause my flow is pure, my flow is whackI'm cooler than the duck that goes "Aflac!"Because everywhere I go women throw themselves at meWAIT, not another verse of misogyny. Because I really don't need to rap to make myself look greatI feel like a million bucks - Scratch that - All the oil in KuwaitI see so many peopel talking about homework or EssaysI look back, reflect about those daysPen to a paper solving equations and doing researchThe thought of all those sources makes me lurchA few more things before I signoffNiflheim turn your mic off!Todd I work for your ISPI'm causing your disconnects like Muhammad Ali Just thought you might like to knowI got no limits to how crazy my raps go!I will say i'm shocked it's went 5 pages and not been reportedThats about as rare as an illegal alien not getting deportedBut i'm thankful off topic is able to bust looseand not be prudish and say "the deuce?" Because these haters just don't understandLove ~ Das , Got my start modding clans nice. (rice) However if the objects I attestIf non formality is what you suggestBut you seem to be going off topic,A forum of with that name? Don't be myopicLet's bring it back to our solar systemSo let me crank up all my cynicism,5 pages by and we have smooth sailedBut soon this thread will be derailed Like a cat I sneak about and meowBut I'll pounce with such trite now.You yourself have previously statedWith inner intention your mind relatedCaused your fingers to sputter like an engineAs such politic threads like Injuns (indians LOL )Are permeated our borders enforced with metersLike fences keep all intellectual heaters Away from our tracks in which we run.So be spontaneous and be funBut stay on the topic of defecatingOn one's personality aching,Cuz when you bring crap like illegal aliensThen go to sleep kid here take an AmbienBecause once that stuff gets up in these jointsNo amount of bengay will ungay this thread's points. edit: yeah my meter is messy in this rhymemaybe if i skip all my hw ill have enough time I have all the 99s, and have been playing since 2001. Comped 4/30/15 My Araxxi Kills: 459::Araxxi Drops(KC):Araxxi Hilts: 4x Eye (14/126/149/459), Web - (100) Fang (193) Araxxi Legs Completed: 5 ---Top (69/206/234/292/361), Middle (163/176/278/343/395), Bottom (135/256/350/359/397)Boss Pets: Supreme - 848 KCIf you play Xbox One - Add me! GT: Urtehnoes - Currently on a Destiny binge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
champion Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Fire, water, air and dirt. [bleep]ing magnets, how do they work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rob Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 ^ I approve. I love you, rocco. That was amazing :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TTanT Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 YO SCHUMUCKS!IN MY EYES YOU AIN'T BUT DUCKS You see, silly humansYou can post all ya wantBut any happiness is humusAnd worth less than a taunt! That didn't make much sense, but didn't need to either'Cause I'm a dinosaur, do you need a breather?I got teeth in my mouth, I got girls in my bedsIf you look at my claws, I can tear you to shreds! Really, don't pull any [cabbage]'Cause I'll make you need a bandage!I run like a Cheetah and jump like a fleaAnd with a single swipe or a chomp, I can decapitate ye! I'm king of OT, and if any disputeAll that'll remain are a hand and a boot! The only difference between Hitler and the man next door who comes home and beats his kids every day is circumstance. The intent is the same-- to harm others.[hide=Tifers say the darndest things]I told her there was a secret method to doing it - and there is - but my once nimble and agile fingers were unable to perform because I was under the influence.I would laugh, not hate. I'm a male. :(Since when was Ireland an island...? :wall:I actually have a hobby of licking public toilet seats.[/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quest_Done Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 I r guy who gun rapI haz bad grammur but i dun give crap my mind r sharp and my w0rds cleaurnoobies go running from my full bronze in fear Im so famous i get camelot telpurts fur fr33and zezima sent a friend request to me i just got abby whip now i cant be beatTASTE MY SPECIAL...oh wait what the beep!?i forgut that meh attack is only 15 dun worry its k, i'll use my l33t steel scimmy horray!swords clash: cling, clang, grate, scrapeshuldnt have dueld a lvl 138 nao i r dead and sadcuz im dead an this raps bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saru Inc Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Runescape?in this place?Good thing this isn't a rat raceMy lvl 130 would claw out your faceTele othering your rhymes to the junkyardAnd snaring whatever is left for my [developmentally delayed]sBecause god knows they need inspirationDue to the lack of perspiration they creatingWith that I partKeep these words in your heart Young MoneyYa Dig A millionaire, I'm a young money millionaireTougher than Nigerian hairMy criteria compared to your career this isn't fairI'm a venereal disease like a menstrual bleedThrough the pencil and leak on the sheet of the tabletIn my mind 'cause I don't write [cabbage], 'cause I ain't got time'cause my seconds, minutes, hours go to the all mighty dollarAnd the all mighty power of that ch, ch, ch, ch chopperSister, brother, son, daughter, father motha[bleep] a coppaGot the Maserati dancin' on the bridge [kitty] poppin'Tell the coppers hahahaha you can't catch 'em, you can't stop 'emI go by them goon rules if you can't beat 'em then you pop 'emYou can't man 'em then you mop 'em,You can't stand 'em then you drop 'em,You pop 'em 'cause we pop 'em like Orville Redenbacher!![bleep] I'm ill A million here, a million thereSicilian [bleep] with long hairWith coke in the derriereLike smoking the thinnest airI open the Lamborghini hopin' them crackers see meLike look at that bastard weezyHe's a beast, he's a dog, he's a mother[bleep]ing problemOK, you're a goon but what's a goon to a goblin?Nothing, nothing -- you ain't scarin' nothingOn some [bleep] [cabbage] call him Denise RodmanCall me what you want [bleep], call me on my sidekickNever answer when it's private, damn I hate a shy [bleep]Don't you hate a shy [bleep]?Yeah I ate a shy [bleep]She ain't shy no more, she changed her name to my [bleep]hahahaha, yeah, [racist term] that's my [bleep]So when she ask for the money, when you through don't be surprised [bleep]It ain't trickin' if you got itBut you like a [bleep] with no ass, you ain't go [cabbage][bleep] I'm ill, not sickAnd I'm OK but my watch sick, yeah my drop sick, yeah my glock sick and my knot thickIM It![bleep] I'm Ill! YeahSee..They say I'm rapping like Big, Jay and Tupac, Andre 3000 where is Erykah Baduh at? Who that?Who that say they're gonna beat Lil' WayneMy name ain't BIC, but I keep that flame manWho that one that do that boy?You all knew thatTrue that swallowAnd I be the [cabbage] now you got loose bowelsI don't owe you like two vowelsBut I would like for you to pay me by the hourHa ha, and I'd rather be pushing flowersThan to be in the penn sharing showersHa, Tony told us this world was oursand the Bible told us every girl was sourdon't play in the garden and don't smell her flowercall me Mr. Carter or Mr. Lawn Mowerboy I got so many [bleep]es like I'm Michael Lowryeven Gwen Stefani said she couldn't doubt me[bleep] I say life ain't [cabbage] without meChrome lips poking out the coup look like it's poutingI do what I do and you do what you can do about it [bleep]I could turn a crack rock into a mountain, dare meDon't you compare me 'cause there ain't nobody near meThey don't see me, but they hear meThey don't feel me, but they fear me.I'm illieC33PHahahaha I have all the 99s, and have been playing since 2001. Comped 4/30/15 My Araxxi Kills: 459::Araxxi Drops(KC):Araxxi Hilts: 4x Eye (14/126/149/459), Web - (100) Fang (193) Araxxi Legs Completed: 5 ---Top (69/206/234/292/361), Middle (163/176/278/343/395), Bottom (135/256/350/359/397)Boss Pets: Supreme - 848 KCIf you play Xbox One - Add me! GT: Urtehnoes - Currently on a Destiny binge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Fo' Snizzle my Nizzle. ...That's rap, right? Popoto.~<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saru Inc Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Right. Oh, so trite. I have all the 99s, and have been playing since 2001. Comped 4/30/15 My Araxxi Kills: 459::Araxxi Drops(KC):Araxxi Hilts: 4x Eye (14/126/149/459), Web - (100) Fang (193) Araxxi Legs Completed: 5 ---Top (69/206/234/292/361), Middle (163/176/278/343/395), Bottom (135/256/350/359/397)Boss Pets: Supreme - 848 KCIf you play Xbox One - Add me! GT: Urtehnoes - Currently on a Destiny binge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
das Posted October 6, 2010 Author Share Posted October 6, 2010 This rap keeps degrading and getting more and more illiterateThey will defend it as "yo dog it's how i rap, it's deliberate.But i'm tired of people rapping about stuff they know nothing aboutYou kid's aint tough or rough we all know seeing a gun would make you shoutHalf of you guys rapping about runescape don't even play anymoreLet's go fight in a PVPworld, and soon you will deploreMe and all my awesome combat skillsI play the game like your girlfriend: Cheap ThrillsBut when the rap is going sour and heading sown southLeave it to the admin to spit some crazy stuff out of his mouthexpect i'm not really speaking to anyone at allthe truth is bitter like the cold of the fallThis post is digital Certainly LyricalPeople will find it mystical Not being egotisticalI'm just speaking how i feelyou know: Keeping it realBe yourself, be who you areAnd you won't sound fake you'll be a starTake these and heed the words of DasIf you don't: I'll kick your ass "Any people anywhere, being inclined and having the power, have the right to rise up, and shake off the existing government, and form a new one that suits them better. This is a most valuable - a most sacred right - a right, which we hope and believe, is to liberate the world."Abraham Lincoln Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skull Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Whats up tif?'Scuse me while I hit this spliffI'm so illContagious, you'll catch a chillSplit yo head and uh, [bleep] ya mindGnaw on your dome and spit out the rind I'm fiendin for knowledgeand uh, dyin' for a purposeGot no ambition for collegeBut don't want to be worthlessJust a product of societyalways runnin' from povertyGotta get your [cabbage] in orderlyand label it chronologically Lookin' back at how far I've comeBut still got a long way 'til I'm doneAfraid to give in,You can never winbut I won't stop 'til I've wonJust gotta stay on the run, run, runI can finally rest at life's setting sun (I haven't wrote any raps in ages. Don't hate.) [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevepole Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 [spoiler=hide]Runescape?in this place?Good thing this isn't a rat raceMy lvl 130 would claw out your faceTele othering your rhymes to the junkyardAnd snaring whatever is left for my [developmentally delayed]sBecause god knows they need inspirationDue to the lack of perspiration they creatingWith that I partKeep these words in your heart Young MoneyYa Dig A millionaire, I'm a young money millionaireTougher than Nigerian hairMy criteria compared to your career this isn't fairI'm a venereal disease like a menstrual bleedThrough the pencil and leak on the sheet of the tabletIn my mind 'cause I don't write [cabbage], 'cause I ain't got time'cause my seconds, minutes, hours go to the all mighty dollarAnd the all mighty power of that ch, ch, ch, ch chopperSister, brother, son, daughter, father motha[bleep] a coppaGot the Maserati dancin' on the bridge [kitty] poppin'Tell the coppers hahahaha you can't catch 'em, you can't stop 'emI go by them goon rules if you can't beat 'em then you pop 'emYou can't man 'em then you mop 'em,You can't stand 'em then you drop 'em,You pop 'em 'cause we pop 'em like Orville Redenbacher!![bleep] I'm ill A million here, a million thereSicilian [bleep] with long hairWith coke in the derriereLike smoking the thinnest airI open the Lamborghini hopin' them crackers see meLike look at that bastard weezyHe's a beast, he's a dog, he's a mother[bleep]ing problemOK, you're a goon but what's a goon to a goblin?Nothing, nothing -- you ain't scarin' nothingOn some [bleep] [cabbage] call him Denise RodmanCall me what you want [bleep], call me on my sidekickNever answer when it's private, damn I hate a shy [bleep]Don't you hate a shy [bleep]?Yeah I ate a shy [bleep]She ain't shy no more, she changed her name to my [bleep]hahahaha, yeah, [racist term] that's my [bleep]So when she ask for the money, when you through don't be surprised [bleep]It ain't trickin' if you got itBut you like a [bleep] with no ass, you ain't go [cabbage][bleep] I'm ill, not sickAnd I'm OK but my watch sick, yeah my drop sick, yeah my glock sick and my knot thickIM It![bleep] I'm Ill! YeahSee..They say I'm rapping like Big, Jay and Tupac, Andre 3000 where is Erykah Baduh at? Who that?Who that say they're gonna beat Lil' WayneMy name ain't BIC, but I keep that flame manWho that one that do that boy?You all knew thatTrue that swallowAnd I be the [cabbage] now you got loose bowelsI don't owe you like two vowelsBut I would like for you to pay me by the hourHa ha, and I'd rather be pushing flowersThan to be in the penn sharing showersHa, Tony told us this world was oursand the Bible told us every girl was sourdon't play in the garden and don't smell her flowercall me Mr. Carter or Mr. Lawn Mowerboy I got so many [bleep]es like I'm Michael Lowryeven Gwen Stefani said she couldn't doubt me[bleep] I say life ain't [cabbage] without meChrome lips poking out the coup look like it's poutingI do what I do and you do what you can do about it [bleep]I could turn a crack rock into a mountain, dare meDon't you compare me 'cause there ain't nobody near meThey don't see me, but they hear meThey don't feel me, but they fear me.I'm illieC33PHahahaha You looking like a foolspitting other rhymes Lets keep it fresh Or we offing you to Riker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Lord Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 When I first saw 'dis threadI started gettin crunk in da headSo I was like daaaamn[racist term]z gonna be postin some spaaaam SWAG Mayn U wanna be like me but U can't be me cuz U ain't got ma swagga on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saru Inc Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Riker?I hardly even know her.Despite what you have heardI'm not one to be lured,I see what you did there,And I know what I'm doing here.If I post other rappers stylesAnd lyrics then wait a whileI aim my pistil like a flowerIt explodes as I pollinateAll other territories.Not to be inflammatory,But let's make this mandatory.Starting right here and now,I'll educate you how to spit downThe raps and attacks and ego fapsThat come with chilling with those that stackUP with the best, we the rest of the futureYou? Go off boy and lick your sutures. we done.no fun. I have all the 99s, and have been playing since 2001. Comped 4/30/15 My Araxxi Kills: 459::Araxxi Drops(KC):Araxxi Hilts: 4x Eye (14/126/149/459), Web - (100) Fang (193) Araxxi Legs Completed: 5 ---Top (69/206/234/292/361), Middle (163/176/278/343/395), Bottom (135/256/350/359/397)Boss Pets: Supreme - 848 KCIf you play Xbox One - Add me! GT: Urtehnoes - Currently on a Destiny binge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
das Posted October 6, 2010 Author Share Posted October 6, 2010 You aim your pistol like a flower? Careful, Phallic Symbols don't empower.Yet in rap we all touch alikeit looks a bit phallic "am i right"?I guess that realization set me backmake me question if my raps make a hackI'm feeling lost latelyFeel like everyone hates meI'm employeed but i feel like i'm barely getting bywork 8 hours then to the bar to go say hito whatever woman catches my sighttake another one home to begin a new plightwaking up next to a stranger I dont knowAnother girl will claim me as her beauI guess last night I was too inebriatedat least inher waking moments she said my loving was unabatedI'm finding what life really is and liking it less and lessI'm trying to be happy but frightened with all the stressI hide in the darkness Barely consciousHide me from the four letter word no filter can containLove: F*** it and everything do with it thereof! "Any people anywhere, being inclined and having the power, have the right to rise up, and shake off the existing government, and form a new one that suits them better. This is a most valuable - a most sacred right - a right, which we hope and believe, is to liberate the world."Abraham Lincoln Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saru Inc Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 Aww I'm sorry, you're lost and confused.Let me guide you quickly through life school.A pistil is part of the flower that helpsThem reproduce is a shame you're such a whelpI have to introduce you to basic biology.Its k when I'm done, I'll read you your eulogy. You say you work 8 hour days, And unnumbered nightsWhere do you find time to sprayYour words that flow so right.I have come to a solutionTo end all the convolutionIt involves detail computingAnd nerd genetic disputing.It seems to me you must have usedNot drugs or girls but goddamn googleTo get all your words and line fused.I see through your lyrical loopholesAnd untie the strings like your shoesWait what am I saying, you still on velcroThey call you the sunday bluesWith nothing to do but stay home. So I find it funny you mention these barsYet all I ever see at the bottom of the user barIs the red titled God named Das all alightMeaning you stay and post all flippin night.YOu say you wake up next to an unknown girlI believe that's because you're still onlineAnd we all know there's no girls in e-worldSo next time you fall asleep next to a mirrortry and remember so the next morning is more clearer. edit: you taking too long to postSo so long my good hostIn the land of nod i retiremaybe when i'm back you'll be higherin the ranks of rappers and kingsbut until then, stop with the flattering I have all the 99s, and have been playing since 2001. Comped 4/30/15 My Araxxi Kills: 459::Araxxi Drops(KC):Araxxi Hilts: 4x Eye (14/126/149/459), Web - (100) Fang (193) Araxxi Legs Completed: 5 ---Top (69/206/234/292/361), Middle (163/176/278/343/395), Bottom (135/256/350/359/397)Boss Pets: Supreme - 848 KCIf you play Xbox One - Add me! GT: Urtehnoes - Currently on a Destiny binge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
das Posted October 6, 2010 Author Share Posted October 6, 2010 For Hours and Hours I fidget with dreadPondering and dwelling on thoughts in my headWondering about my past mistakes and regretsWondering about my sinful debtsWishing that some things i've done people would forgetThe things i've done would wake you up in a cold sweatDone alot of things stupid and a few things smartFriends know me as loyal, with a good heartPain makes you stronger, it inspiresTo say that you know where my raps come from?You'd have to know my life, me before and see who i've becomeI work my shift in the nightGraveyard shift, not a delightIt pays the bills, enough downtime at it to keep me on tip.it - ChillYou can't escape the pain of your pastYou'll realize kid - life goes by fastYou gotta use it to inspire and to build uponThis rap is from this heart, not put onTheres alot of things i've done thats helped me growrelations with women are one of those things yo.Can't say i've ever turned to drugs never resorted to shooting slugsI'm a poetic romanticMy loving makes women franticI was a weak insecure kid who embraced rapGave me confidence and made me want to scrapEven though i really had no chanceFearless: Like Jet Li at a glanceI don't have to justify anything to youCol. Mustard, go get a clueBecause you assume an awful lotYou don't know me by a longshotBut it's cool you think you can hangWe all know you dont have gameSo yeah, I rap about what I knowDigitally transcribing them in this flowMistakes, Regrets, Bad choicesI hear the multitude of voicesSaying how I coulda done this or thatYou fool, you stepped into lyrical combatNothing you can say will ever drag me downIt's impossible for you to induce a frownI've overcame adversity I thrive in diversityAs i grow older, I grow stronger, ColderBolder, Some say I got a chip on my shoulderNothing phases me, nothing can stop meConfidence Shining like a broadway Marquee.Got my friends, got my family - I got JesusI'm a triple crown winner, Flawless like preaknessYeah, I just dropped god in a rap, you speechless?The transition was flawless, Seemless if you wrote your doctorate on rap i'm your thesis Owning haters like the Jedi Killer General GrievousSome might say my style and flow is GeniusBut all that praise is really needlessSo i'm going to step off the mic and ask you "Was that your best shot"?Sorry Dude, I thought you said your rhymes were hot.I'm already at a disadvantage because I don't have a FilterBecause I drop curses in real life like the open road knows a drifter "Any people anywhere, being inclined and having the power, have the right to rise up, and shake off the existing government, and form a new one that suits them better. This is a most valuable - a most sacred right - a right, which we hope and believe, is to liberate the world."Abraham Lincoln Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sentry_Wolf Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 There once was a boy,Always ready to deploy. He isn't very good at the rap,He'd really rather drink a frap.But theres no disrespect,Your no insect.So keep on truckin'It has him funkin'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 It was too long, I didn't readCould someone sum up, in my need? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
das Posted October 6, 2010 Author Share Posted October 6, 2010 when it comes to rap. i own any questions?not picking a rap battle iwth me is a suggestion "Any people anywhere, being inclined and having the power, have the right to rise up, and shake off the existing government, and form a new one that suits them better. This is a most valuable - a most sacred right - a right, which we hope and believe, is to liberate the world."Abraham Lincoln Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danqazmlp Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 This thread got off to a good startBut really, none of you are smartI'm gonna be off the chartPut you in a shopping cartBreak your heartMake you fartLike fine artMe and the win can't be kept apartI think it's time for me to depart... Want to be my friend? Look under my name to the left<<< and click the 'Add as friend' button!Big thanks to Stevepole for the signature!^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dupin Posted October 6, 2010 Share Posted October 6, 2010 This thread has truly made me sad.I read these rhymes; they're all so bad. You see, this is the internet.A rapper? No, you are a poet.These lines, they won't ever be said.They are typed, they will be read. Your rhymes, they won't get you no-where.And so, one thing you must beware:A random rhyme's no good at all.Your random lines will be your fall. Use some meter. Use some grace.Please, make this thread a worthwhile place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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