Meiessiah Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 I was there on that fateful day when You stole the leaves from the trees Leaving them bare and unprotected And dying by degrees from disease I watched as the fertile earth turned to desert grain by grain The insects flew to greener pastures Now only the parasites dare to remain Birds gasped last tiny breaths Fluttering weakly down to die The sky turned black and angry And the sun began to cry The rivers and streams that once Sang and played to my heart Flowed to a much better place As the earth split and tore apart I stood alone in the barren waste Of a life which once held a dream Till the moment my body joined yours And eternity began to scream. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unFaith Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 Very well done :) You really captured the grisly environment quite nicely with such few words. Is this about meeting someone (perhaps a girl) and her tearing your world apart? Or is it about something else, perhaps the change in one's mind to a much more evil psychology? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meiessiah Posted July 29, 2004 Author Share Posted July 29, 2004 Very well done :) You really captured the grisly environment quite nicely with such few words. Is this about meeting someone (perhaps a girl) and her tearing your world apart? Or is it about something else, perhaps the change in one's mind to a much more evil psychology? Err.. well I'm a girl :D (I'm Meiessiah, Azn Purity is my bf :P, it's the sig that confused at times), in fact you have it both right, it's a double edged sword. Relationships can be like that, and so can the inner person. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nighthawkpro Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 did u make it up or u just copy frm some1?? but overall very emotionally complicated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meiessiah Posted July 29, 2004 Author Share Posted July 29, 2004 did u make it up or u just copy frm some1?? but overall very emotionally complicated :) :shock: I only ever post poems that are my own :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____ Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 Very well written Meiessiah :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 poems like this freak me out, complicated and sad, obviously, you need some counseling... Dr. Xewleer always listen, I mean, if Montel or other's can do it? Why can't I? Its all good... I disappear into the mist! I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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