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Rage of Fury, In a Frigid War - Poem

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Rage of Fury, In a Frigid War

 

 

 

Agony and hatred in my own domain

 

Acrimony and alienation under my own homely dwelling

 

Outbursts of laughtered is heard

 

Display of repugnance, abhorrence, loath and disgust

 

When mentioned

 

 

 

There is no safer place than my own domain

 

But it is that very place that deliquesces my very fragile hope away

 

A hope that is endured on a frivolously made piece twine

 

 

 

Only grief?

 

No

 

 

 

Merely heartbroken?

 

No

 

 

 

Simply misery?

 

No

 

 

 

Wholly isolation?

 

No...

 

And no

 

 

 

How many tears have I shed

 

For just this?

 

How many days have I dread

 

For just this?

 

How many hours have I bestowed to this one pain

 

How many minutes have I suffered from all these chains

 

 

 

This rage set upon my heart is real

 

It rips through my essence as a finely sharpened blade

 

This acrimonious, acerbity rampage fumed for me to feel

 

Like a volcano set to erupt and rumble the earth at an unknown will

 

The fury of my mind appears so vivacious

 

An uncontrollable rhapsodical state of mind so graciously

 

Fueled by not only sorrow salacious

 

But by ferocity with an unstoppable rage

 

 

 

Six years I've hidden myself

 

Six years I've lived sheltered behind a mask

 

Six years of living a garnished lie

 

Six years of enslaving myself away from the world

 

Camouflaged under a frail sheer

 

Away from all my fears

 

 

 

Merely six years...

 

How will the years to come feel

 

How will the years to come wither away my very soul

 

How will these years perceive under my own brittle skin

 

 

 

Merely six years

 

 

 

What will come is not known

 

But what I feel now is no less than a needle puncturing my heart and soul

 

Everyday

 

Deteriorating just a fracture more when each lie is told

 

My quintessence sees a wary coming

 

As for a future untold

 

It is no more, but just for now

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Wow, that's just amazing.

 

 

 

To be honest, I don't think you can really do anything to it. It's a fantastic poem, just one teeny-weeny suggestion; put a full stop at the end of last verse.

 

 

 

Issy.

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Whoa this looks more like a poem than others because it's in itallics.


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