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THE BLOODSTAINED BLADE

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Chapter One

 

 

 

I crouched behind the bushes, a wooden toy sword in my hand. I peered through the small twigs and saw Jacob, my friend. He was crossing the yard, his toy shield raised, just waiting for me to come out.

 

I picked up a rock, and threw it into a tree behind him, rustling the branches. He turned around, and I sprang from the bushes. He spun around again at the sound of my footsteps, and raised his shield. I swung my sword against his shield with my entire body. I fell over on top of him. He swung at my arm, and I dodged it. I leaned forward, putting more weight on him, and the dull end of my toy sword touched his throat.

 

I heard my mother calling. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅNicholas! Jacob! Dinnertime.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ


"Dost hath not giveth thy name 'noob' to thy brethren...

...Or thou art must considereth thyself a noob as well."

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Great start, keep going this sounds like it will be a great story :)


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The Carter III

"I can get your brains for a bargain, like I bought it from Target.

Hiphop is my supermarket, shoppin' cart full of fake hiphop artists."

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Chapter Two

 

 

 

I slowly crept down the stairs, my knapsack full of clothes and other essentials. As I got ready to leave, my parents told me their goodbyes, and how much they loved me. I stood up, getting ready to say a final goodbye. My dad hurried over to me.

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅNick, before you go, I want you to have something.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ


"Dost hath not giveth thy name 'noob' to thy brethren...

...Or thou art must considereth thyself a noob as well."

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Chapter Two

 

 

 

I slowly crept down the stairs, my knapsack full of clothes and other essentials. As I got ready to leave, my parents told me their goodbyes, and how much they loved me. I stood up, getting ready to say a final goodbye. My dad hurried over to me.

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅNick, before you go, I want you to have something.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ


"Dost hath not giveth thy name 'noob' to thy brethren...

...Or thou art must considereth thyself a noob as well."

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oops! admin, can you fix that? I accidentaly posted chapter two twice.


"Dost hath not giveth thy name 'noob' to thy brethren...

...Or thou art must considereth thyself a noob as well."

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doublepost :shame: :lol:

 

 

 

Great story man, its moving a bit quick for me, but all in all its great, keep on going :wink:

 

 

 

~~Byers


babydz3.jpg

 

The Carter III

"I can get your brains for a bargain, like I bought it from Target.

Hiphop is my supermarket, shoppin' cart full of fake hiphop artists."

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its ok at the moment but you've rushed it to much but part from that its gd just try not to rush it


Death shall not leave my side untill i have succumbed to darkness or i'm to wasted to give a damn!

 

I shall now join you at the gates of heaven.......if i'm allowed!

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Chapter Three

 

 

 

The manÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s lifeless body lay on the ground before me. Jacob and I both had desperate looks on our faces. Our thoughts were interrupted by a White Knight. He had a low, deep voice that seemed to come from deep inside his helmet.

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅHello.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ


"Dost hath not giveth thy name 'noob' to thy brethren...

...Or thou art must considereth thyself a noob as well."

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yay keep going :P Good story, time for revenge against the white nights :o


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The Carter III

"I can get your brains for a bargain, like I bought it from Target.

Hiphop is my supermarket, shoppin' cart full of fake hiphop artists."

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Very interesting.

 

 

 

Continue.


Does anyone happen to know death_siren? She stole a green mask from me, and I think I found my way into her ignore list. If you know anything, please, don't hesitate to give me a pm.

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Chapter Four

 

 

 

I awoke to the quiet jingling of keys. I slowly opened my eyes, and found that the jail guards were opening the cell. I shut my eyes again. I didnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t feel like talking to them right now. I heard them walk inside, and I barely moved my eyelids, just enough to watch them pick up a sleeping Jacob. They quickly hauled him out of the cell, and dropped him outside the door. I could hear the men talking.

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhy are we taking him?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ


"Dost hath not giveth thy name 'noob' to thy brethren...

...Or thou art must considereth thyself a noob as well."

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Man this story rocks, i cant wait to hear the rest of it!!

 

=D> =D> =D>

 

 

 

~~Byers


babydz3.jpg

 

The Carter III

"I can get your brains for a bargain, like I bought it from Target.

Hiphop is my supermarket, shoppin' cart full of fake hiphop artists."

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I love the story so far!


When sperm whales mate, 3/4 of the sperm goes into the sea, not his mate.

Thats why sea water tastes funny

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