Just some C/C. The biggest part of it that you should work on is proportions, in my opinion. -Nose is too big for the face and is also too flat. You would have to add more shading to fix the nose, or draw her at an angle. -Hand is way too small compared to the rest of the body. In my opinion, I would remove the hand completely and just have it resting at her side, off the page. -Fix up the outline. -Nice attempt at hair, but maybe you should look at more tutorials for it. -Add some ears in that mess of hair. -Sides of the face lack definition I would suggest drawing from references before attempting to freehand which I am assuming is what you did ( forgive me if I'm wrong ). It isn't terrible, but there is plenty to improve on. Hope this helps.