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A_DirtyPotato

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    Houston, Texas --- It snowed this year. :D
  1. The snow on the snowman looks more like frosted glass than snow. I like the idea but it seems like the snowman is tearing up, not sure if that's what you were going for or not. I think the trees look too conspicious if you were going for the quick/rough look for the background, maybe fade them more or use thinner lines. Those are amazing concept drawings, I like the background for them and all as well.
  2. The second one is also my favorite; although, I think if you were to edit out the blurry lights on the far left, it would look better. Just my opinion. They're all very nice, what kind of camera do you use?
  3. When did you make this? I'm pretty sure I've seen this before.
  4. Just some C/C. The biggest part of it that you should work on is proportions, in my opinion. -Nose is too big for the face and is also too flat. You would have to add more shading to fix the nose, or draw her at an angle. -Hand is way too small compared to the rest of the body. In my opinion, I would remove the hand completely and just have it resting at her side, off the page. -Fix up the outline. -Nice attempt at hair, but maybe you should look at more tutorials for it. -Add some ears in that mess of hair. -Sides of the face lack definition I would suggest drawing from references before attempting to freehand which I am assuming is what you did ( forgive me if I'm wrong ). It isn't terrible, but there is plenty to improve on. Hope this helps.
  5. I'm trying to think of this word and it's bugging the crap out of me lol. It's like an object that has no background, or the background is deleted around a certain object. Hope someone knows, it's really annoying not knowing >
  6. I really like them all, but I think you need to clarify a focal point. I guess it's just me, but it looks too crowded and seems to lack a purpose. They seem just thrown together.
  7. WHO GAVE HIM A KNIFE O.O
  8. I don't know how you make it out alive. I'm glad there are people out there that actually enjoy this update.
  9. It was a really nice video, I really enjoy f2p pking just because it used to be so hard to get a kill from all the tele'ers and runners, lol. Only thing I didn't like was that the text was right in the middle of the screen, and way too noticeable. I guess suggestions don't really matter because the lack of a wilderness, but there's my two cents nonetheless.
  10. I'll try it! If you don't mind, however, sending me some pictures of the items such as the godsword (I quit before that came out and i've never seen it before) and what the heck is an ancients o-0. the signature i have now is a sample of my work; if you want more just PM me and i'll send you some of my recent signatures.
  11. Very simplistic and clean; I like it. Only thing that's off is the text, imo. Just doesn't fit in and draws my attention from Mario directly to it. 9.9/10, just cause of the text.
  12. Internet Explorer does suck; firefox ftw! :D I like the blue one best out of the two, just cause blue's perdy :>
  13. Really good but the guy farthest away is holding his mace a little awkwardly o.0. Maybe make it slant a little, like towards the queen; it's really nice, maybe add a little more shading to it to make it more realistic and have that 'complete' feeling. umm.. a rating 8/10 because of lack of realisticism and awkwardism :@
  14. I thought it was funny, but the animation goes a little too fast on some parts so that I had to watch it a couple times to read it all. Only CC would be to slow it down where it needs to be. :)
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