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  1. Well, since SmokeEagle seems to be lagging somewhat in his updation... Pandora's Requiem Chapter 8: Apocalypse Next Wednesday I opened my eyes after what seemed like an eternity and did a double take of the small child-sized, tomato-red imp that stood in the middle of the summoning circle. Its two oversized wings flapped uselessly as the being tried to fly. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAre you sure thatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s a demon?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
  2. JayÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s fingers hummed lightly over the keyboard. Now that heÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢d got up to speed with his typing and was perked up on stims his fingers were a pink blur. His eyes were closed and his tongue clenched between his teeth in concentration. Travis watched the AÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, TÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, GÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, and CÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, and the occasional Nanobot Nucleotide base N flowing down the screen. Once of twice he thought he saw a letter which probably shouldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t be there but he was saying nothing for fear of breaking the typing nanomageÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s concentration and turning the girl into a huge, tumorous lump. OK, he definitely just saw a K in there. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAre you sure you know this?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
  3. It's quite good. I was expecting it to be a load of random, badly-written junk, but it wasn't. Nice work.
  4. Remind me next friday and I'll write five freaking chapters. But you know more about Anarchy online than i do. All I've seen of it is a few hours of the training island and the training zoo place and all of that was very very jerky. I'll make up for it when we do a Zelda fanfiction.
  5. My super-computer calculates there's a hundred percent chance it would kick your [wagon] in mano a mano combat. Also, it says the last number of pi is 4. It's still calculating yo mommas age.
  6. Cheers for the reviews. We aim to please. Little vote: who wants a romance/relationship between Travis and Kefla? Also, a Guildwars fanfiction will probably be coming in about two weeks, once I have the game, coursework is gone, Christmas is in, and we need something to take our minds off revision, and Smoke's internet limit has run out so he's unable to go on Guildwars.
  7. Your wish is granted but the sheer magical energy required to grant it drains the universe of all energy and life force, so you're left looking moderately ugly in a desolate Universe. I wish I knew what to wish for.
  8. It does but they're rubbish , overheat frequently, and their lasers travel at five miles an hour. I wish I were a girly, just like my dear papa!
  9. It isn't, it's based on carbon. (LMAO. All those biology lessons are finnally paying off.) I wish that I could introduce a virus which killed off all the men in G &S:TOTC
  10. I think that's sorted, although I'm not exactly sure what hard returns are, so tell me if its wrong. And ditto to what ^ said. Thanks for the review.
  11. http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?p=876 ... ht=#876909 Read it and weep. The Gaalsien and SmokeEagle Saga. I stand by my origonal statement of up yours. I've got quite a bit of coursework going at the moment but you can finish the next chapter if you want.
  12. 01:23am Omni-1 Trade District The door jerked and spasmed its way open through the chunks of time. Stumbling out of the lift, Kefla made an attempt for the wall. The Universe froze for a second and, when it moved again, she was flat on the floor. The stims in her head designed to heighten awareness were starting to degrade, causing large chunks of consciousness to randomly speed up, slow down, or just disappear altogether, an experience known in the nightclubs as lagging out. Grabbing a handful of the thick, lavender-scented carpet, she pulled herself towards the darkened doorway to her room. Gradually, lurching, she made her way across the penthouse floor. Halfway there, she was sick. The self-cleaning carpet fibers scurried in to do their work. She groaned, clawed out for more carpet and felt only the cool, marble flooring. Her hand skittered around the floor until it connected with the thick, oak front leg of the sofa; stim-enhanced fingers sank into the wood like warm butter. She grabbed out for the back leg. It felt strangely metal and strangely moving. "Kefla, what did your father say about going down to the streets?" Groaning, she released her grip on the bodyguard's leg and felt his armored gauntlet take her own in a firm grip and pull her upright. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYou know how dangerous it is nowadays!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
  13. I didn't change it. I'm pretty sure it was always that. And besides, the whole thing's from GAALSIEN'S PERSPECTIVE!! Thus, he is the more important character. Thus, he gets his name first. Thus, the title stays as it is. Thus, hahaha, up yours Smoke.
  14. Will do. just as soon as we get the film where the cockle pickers get eaten by the giant, mountain-sized barnace done (inside joke). Personally, I can't see this gettig published anywhere, not even comic books.
  15. It's nice to see you again. No0xers? Seriously? Wasn't one leet language bad enough? Well we haven't played on runescape in a while so we're not exactly with the times. I could start a new topic but the mods would probably eat me alive so I'll let Smoke do that. New chapter coming soon btw. And I'll pay you your 10K teh_soldier but whats your in-game-name?
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