archimage_a Posted November 6, 2006 Share Posted November 6, 2006 Neither good, not evil Only resolve The symbols Lost meaning Inverted pentagram Crucifix Both only there No feeling Life and death Good and evil God and devil Meaning nothing Instinct remains To banish the other Good to defeat evil Evil to defeat good Standing Intolerable energies Surging foward A cataclysm An epic Untold Not to win Only to kill Conflict Ying and yang Balance Remain Always equal Neither or both Joined at birth Locked in life Peace to end Only to die Not existing Outside spirit Mind to end End to life Life to darkness Darkness to death Death To an end The final end The only end The end http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted November 6, 2006 Share Posted November 6, 2006 You really do try too hard, Archie... :lol: Anyway um. I don't like it. Too short lines, they're just pretty cliche phrases, nothing special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted November 6, 2006 Author Share Posted November 6, 2006 That was the point, they are just phrases, not a story, not a poem, linked only by the power of your mind... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncmd Posted November 8, 2006 Share Posted November 8, 2006 pretty nice. Issy, I thought you would have picked up on the fact that he *only* picked cliche phrases. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted November 8, 2006 Author Share Posted November 8, 2006 Thanks dragon. Don't be hard on Issy though. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti Posted November 9, 2006 Share Posted November 9, 2006 Very nice. I understood it well. :D. Good read. We need more of those. Does anyone happen to know death_siren? She stole a green mask from me, and I think I found my way into her ignore list. If you know anything, please, don't hesitate to give me a pm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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