Slyde go away please dont post on this topic all you are dis spamming it with your comments tha are pointless... im no where near great at sis but im learning and my other posts i ask for cc not this one PLEASE stop commenting

I'm trying to help you... You dont like constructive criticism, too bad... If I suck so bad, How did I make this in 40 minutes?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1 Minute, I got to fix the Brich typo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: here it is...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm trying to help you... You dont like constructive criticism, too bad... If I suck so bad, How did I make this in 40 minutes?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1 Minute, I got to fix the Brich typo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: here it is...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OFF TOPIC:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is that for sale? or you willing to make me one I will pay

naw, I dont feel like making sigs and selling them right now, plus I didnt save that... but im sure you can find some1 better than me... :P

Slyde go away please dont post on this topic all you are dis spamming it with your comments tha are pointless... im no where near great at sis but im learning and my other posts i ask for cc not this one PLEASE stop commenting

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He's not spamming, he's telling you how to do it correctly. The lines you have currently are terrible, they just look plain ugly. You should try shading it like Slyde says, because there are no lines in plate armor, what appears to be lines are really shadows off muscle defenition and armor shaping. Theres hardly any lines on any type of armor.

ran uses black lines as an outline 2 an image not to show muscle tonage(sp?), grooves ect

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i suppose im a noob for tellin you this to? not that im not when it comes to pixel

The only n00bs are the ones who cant take a bad rating, or who cant take constructive criticism.

I dont mind CC when i ask for it but i thought about it... :) so i thought maybe slydes got somin here and decided to take out the black trim lines is this what u meant the new pic is above and the originall is below

 

 

 

 

 

 

IMO, the 1st looks better, but it'd look even better if the plate wasnt so long =/

wow, u really editted it. imma need those rain effects and thunder though =\.

plate is kinda long ill see about that and yeah maybe add back in the lines it doesnt look as good i think im working on rain deth :wink:

New pic looks much better but the bottom line looks a bit awkward.

you just dont know how to shade detail... you need to work on your shading, all you did was make your lines lighter...