This is good work, ignore the bad comments...I doubt they could do the same.

 

 

 

One thing though; is the image itself yours? If not you have to give author credit otherwise it's art-ripping. I hate seeing art that's been ripped off and then manipulated a tiny bit (like here) then having an artist call it their own without notion to creditting where credit is due.

 

 

 

:) Otherwise you're on to a good start..what program are you using? Look into downloading tutorials and plug-ins specially suited for creating your own typographic fonts

I believe V1 is better. The text on V2 isn't suitable for the design in my view. :-#