His name was one that people feared most of all, one that even animals understood as evil! That name is Jack Frost. He lies in wait till christmas eve then he stalks his prey; he lives in mountains with snow on their peaks and birds of no simple matter. This story is about how varrock got its fright!

 

 

 

 

 

Twas evening in the city of Varrock with its bricks so firm against its buildings. The pubs were getting full and the shops were closing down. Barbarians were resting just outside the city walls. Everyone else was sleeping hard because it was Christmas Eve! But not everyone was sleeping either, One creature so dark was making his plans. Plans that have been stored for years to come, plans that will turn a man white with fright at the secrets of their contents! Plans to destroy varrock city! This man was the legendary Jack Frost ready for another years work. He had been keeping a low profile for five years and it was his time to shine.

 

 

 

 

 

First he would start with the poor folk, easy start, then he would move on to the more challenging. Off he went down the side path of his glorious cave of which still needs to be discovered to slay the mortal beings of varrock city square! House after house he passed with blood on his scimitar and brains on his kiteshield. Not knowing that there were knew spies in wait for anything suspicious. After about two hundred kills Jack moved onto the guard houses which to his suprise were quite an easy fight. Slah after slash on their own terroritory they fell, with a crunch Jack left the houses towards the palace! Of course there were guards awake at the doors but they were no match to Jacks incredible level of a hundred and thrty eight! inside he crept through the passageways.

 

 

 

 

 

The King was still awake guarded by thousands of elite guards of the higehst quality awaiting Jacks presence. The spies by the side of the King saw Jack enter and leave the guard houses obviously went to tell the King. Jack had no idea of this, just rage amongst his own being taht this was the right thing to do. There was a door, were the king and his thousands of guards were behind. Jack breathed a mighty sigh and opened the door. Nothing was there, he tried the next door, nothing, and then the next. After about sixty doors or so Jack was sure this one was it! He brandished his scimitar and clenched it tightly in his hand. Hand on handle he clicked teh door open...

 

 

 

To be continued in part 2...

there is some spelling/grammar issues, but I would like to see what happens next, though it ended kinda abruptly.

yeh i had to rush it near the end cus i had to go to out somewere :? but other than that i will be doing the second half maybe tomoroow or something :)

yeh i had to rush it near the end cus i had to go to out somewere :? but other than that i will be doing the second half maybe tomoroow or something :)

 

 

 

Please don't tell me you are one of the people that write your story on TIF and not on another program... Just remember, when you do that, you might lose it all if we have another roll back.

im going to start on the second part of the story now :D hope u like it ~ ill try keep my spelling in order..

He clenched the handle and pushed it open. For a second the room was dark and cold, then there was the sound of rustling armour and bow strings being tightened. The light cicked on, Jack hid behind a box in the corner and waited, very quetly for something to happen. About seven minutes passes and Jack was starting to get suspicious about wether or not anyone was there. Then, an arrow hit the wall besides him! Jack rolled out with his scimitar and sheild tight against him and sliced through the crowd of men. Blood trickling off there faces as they dropped to the floor. Jack was sure that he would not make it, but he kept on trying and trying to reach his goal. Arrow after arrow he dodged, sword after sword he tackled until, After serious pain, Jack fell to his knees. He looked at his shoulder, an arrow about one foot long appeared out of it!

 

 

 

 

 

"I see Jack Frost you are in pain, yes?" Boomed the King.

 

Jack looked at him with a dizzy feeling and replied,

 

"Yes, your majesty, im in pain, pain to kill you!"

 

With that Jack grabbed the arrow protuding out of him and threw it as hard as he could at the Kings head! Everyone stopped to look at the arrow in mid air. Slowly it came to the King and before Jack realized on what he had done the arrow was sticking out of the Kings head like a second nose.

 

"No, my brother, what have i done!" Screamed Jack as he went to cradle the dead King in his arms.

 

Archers aimed there bows and fired at Jack. They all hit him in teh chest but he was still crying over his lost brother! Blood gushing out of him Jack tried to stand up with the King to take him outside but the guards sliced him away from the body. Jack looked around at everyone, then cried:

 

"I am sorry for what i have done, you may kill me for who i have killed!"

 

All the people in the room had a slice and an arrow at him.

 

 

 

 

 

The next month the burial for the King was taking place in the palace grounds. All the kings sons and doughters were there to grieve over the loss of a great King. But no one was over the other side of the palace were the evil brother Jack Frost was being buried. All exept one person who no one could see. An invisible person that would soon rule runescape. That person is the almighty Cobweb86!

So, they both die, and at the end you say how great you are? Sorry but I rate this story 2/5. It was short, not enough description, and at the end you said you were great - that last one fails stuff automatically #-o .

yahh i got carried away..

 

but do u still think i did good?

 

because it took me absolutley ages to write it.

 

also, i have played runescape for 5 years now and i was hoping this could be in a book or something in the meeting history museum (apart from the bit where i say im great)

Well, Jagex would make it longer, less graphic because theres like 7 year olds playing, and change some parts, but they mightuv used it.