Tell me what u think,I worked on it for about an hour.... :P Also point out any flaws u see...I dont think i saw MANY.... :D

 

 

 

looks pretty good, and i like the theme...

 

 

 

BUT...

 

 

 

1. Most of the image is a flat colour, put more effort into shading and take more time, 1 hour isn't that long, pixels take many days on end if u really want to put good deatil into it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. The colours are a bit too bright for my liking...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. I also have been critisized (also known as c/c (constructive critisism)) for using the spraycan too much... if u do use it, try to belnd it a bit more, and don't use too obvious colours... like on the bush and the tree for example.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4. Maybe make the berries stand out a bit more infront of the leaves... or wateva they are.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5. u can tell u've started colouring in the tree outline, take ur time on it and if u start on one bit, try to do the whole image...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

overall, it's pretty good for a first try, I'd give it a 7/10, but i could do with some work... Practice makes perfect :wink:

good work

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not bad

 

 

 

Modified Version....

 

 

 

I am also going to add more to the tree, to mage it look more real :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More modified...waiting for more c/c to make changes.... :o