Castle Wars Story! Castle Wars and fighting and bombs!

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~~~Part One Purewc's Bravery~~~ Characters Blufire70 (me) and Penut514 and Purewc968 (my friends)

I stood before the blood red portal, checking my equipment. Granite maul and platebody, rune platelegs and four potions, two attack and two strength. Both filled to the brim. Good, I thought, I'm ready. "Hey Purewc, Penut, y'all ready?!!?!" Purewc968 was wearing full adamant and a rune scimitar. Penut514 was wearing full blue mystic, along with a decent amount of fire bolts. He wielded a fire staff. "I don't wanna die!! Mommy mommy save me!!" Purewc wailed. I shoved Penut into him, and them both tumbled into the Zamorak portal. I jumped in after them. Here goes nothing, I thought. We were teleported almost instantly. "Everybody stock up on bandages!!" I yelled as I shoved 24 just barely into my pack. Penut carried all our other needed supplies. We were playing Castle Wars, and we all rushed underground. Penut blew up all the rocks along the ground with explosive potions. We got to the ladder to Saradomin's castle. "Up up up you narbs!" A level 74 who was chasing us yelled. We got up the ladder and into the supply room. Level 74-boy was still on our tail. "Leave him to me!" Purewc screamed. Level 74-boy came at Purewc with a DDP. It clashed with his addy kiteshield. "Run you idiotic noobs!!" Purewc yelled strainingly. Penut and I rushed up the second ladder. Level 74-boy, so-called Mokof2,used a special and Purewc's shield flew to the ground. Mokof was about to strike when Purewc ran under his legs and stabbed his scimmy in Mokof's back. Crud! thought Mokof. I forgot to put on my rune platebody! He had barely enough money to afford full rune, so that Blufire70 would have been a problem. This noob, though, would be easy, he thought to himself as he put on his rune plate. "You shouldn't have done that!!!" Mokof yelled. He raised his dagger up high and plunged it into Purewc's shoulder. Purewc screamed bloody murder, and his bright red hood and cape were stained dark with blood.

Mokof pushed the dagger deeper. Purewc smacked his head with the side of his scimitar, and Mokof pulled the dagger out. Purewc charged at Mokof with his scimitar held high. Mokof back up and climbed onto a table, but Purewc dropped his weapon and clenched something near his shoulder. "Ah," Mokof said, thinking he was clenching his wound. "The poison's working it's magic. Purewc grinned, and produced two potions from his pack. "Yes, but number one"- he paused, drinking one potions,-"I have an anti-poison, and number two, you're standing on explosive potions." He hurled the other potion, a bright orange explosive potion, and it hit the others, right at Mokof's feet.

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM.

I rushed up the stairs, into the blue base. The long, flowing Saradomin banners hanging on walls cast eerie shadows on the granite floor. I paused to gaze at them, and was lost in thought. "Come on!" Penut yelled, snapping me back to reality. I shook my head to get rid of the grogginess, and ran up the stairs. I ran right on Penut's heels up the stairs and into the room. When I entered I only saw two things. The Saradomin flag. And a noob. He was in full iron, very old and brittle. The iron was chipping off at places, and it looked like had been painted over. The dark gray was dull, and the chestplate had a chip missing out of it. It was old, and he had probably found it or bought it off the Grand Exchange. He had no helmet on, and I flung my maul at him. "HYAGH!!!" I wailed, the granite of my maul easily smashed his iron. The iron shattered everywhere, one piece impaling his head right above his eye. His eyes were wide with terror as his body flung across the room. What was left of his armor cracked easily against the wall, and most impaled his back. He fell to the floor, face down. I quickly used my special once, shattering his head, splattering brains and blood all over me. "Blu!!" Penut screamed. I turned my head in confusion, and got slammed to the floor by a Dragon battleaxe.

I staggered up, lethargic, when one of Penuts fire bolts sent a towering body hurling over me. I looked at what it was, and I saw him. It was a level 104, in full dragon. I stood to admire it. The Dragon full helm he had on was polished and shiny, almost new. His Dragon platebody was newly forged, but very dry and sturdy. He had on Dragon gauntlents, platelegs, and boots also. And in his left hand was a Dragon visage. The visage was a dragon's face, it's jaws sticking out to eat you. Strapped to his back was a Dragon halberd, and on his waist were many poisoned Dragon daggers, all strapped in a belt. He unsheathed a Dragon longsword from his belt, throwing his battleaxe to the ground. His eyes were bloodlust, and he was staring straight at me. "Y-y-y-ou!" he stuttered. "You killed my BROTHER!" he shouted flinging his body at me. I nimbly jump aside, taking out my rune long sword. I grabbed a bottle of poison from my backpack, dousing it on the sword. I thrust it at him the second he slashed at me. I missed and jumped back, parrying. I brought the sword down from over my head, clashing it to his. The tension built, and I couldn't hold up much longer. He grinned, pushing harder with ease. All of a sudden Penut jumped in and ripped off the 104's platebody, plunging a poisoned rune dagger into his shoulder. The 104 just snickered, and bashed Penut to the wall. "I don't want to kill you," he grimaced, removing the dagger. His sword was still against mine, and he put his other hand on the handle and pushed harder. I doubled over backwards, my sword clattered to the ground next to me in two pieces. He pulled off my body and pulled out a couple daggers from his belt. He tossed his sword and shield to the ground, and pulled two daggers over his head. "Now, for my brother, DIE!!" In a flash, a bright orange exploded the center of the room. It ate through the floor and ceiling. I uncurled out of my shivering little human ball and noticed that it was an explosion. I looked down the hole and saw Purewc waving. "I thought you might need some help!" He smiled. "Come on up, help us get the flag!"

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