deathsux Posted June 3, 2009 Share Posted June 3, 2009 Original reads: Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, Ghostspeak amulet(obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours. Corrected Version reads: Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, and Ghostspeak amulet (obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours). deathsux, don't do it. deathsux Credit goes to: deathsux. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterbrain Posted June 3, 2009 Share Posted June 3, 2009 actually, to be 100% grammatically correct, there should not be a comma after Spade. Not a big deal, but then again, neither was yours :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lood333 Posted June 3, 2009 Share Posted June 3, 2009 Original reads: Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, Ghostspeak amulet(obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours. Corrected Version reads: Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, and Ghostspeak amulet (obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours). deathsux, don't do it. deathsux Credit goes to: deathsux. Sorry but I don't really see any difference. The Original guide's version does however seem correct to me even if it is just missing a comma or something like that EDITED: There should be the word 'and' after Spade because the If you are describing something for example the last thing your describing should have an 'and' in front of it, for example. Hopefully you see what I'm getting at: Gorgeous, pretty and beautiful Ugly, disgusting and revolting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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