Original reads:

 

 

 

Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, Ghostspeak amulet(obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours.

 

 

 

Corrected Version reads:

 

 

 

Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, and Ghostspeak amulet (obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours).

 

 

 

deathsux, don't do it.

 

deathsux

 

 

 

Credit goes to: deathsux.

actually, to be 100% grammatically correct, there should not be a comma after Spade.

 

 

 

Not a big deal, but then again, neither was yours :P

Original reads:

 

 

 

Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, Ghostspeak amulet(obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours.

 

 

 

Corrected Version reads:

 

 

 

Items: 3 bronze wire, silver bar, 5 spools of thread, needle, 50gp, Spade, and Ghostspeak amulet (obtain from Father Uhrney in Lumbridge Swamp if you lost yours).

 

 

 

deathsux, don't do it.

 

deathsux

 

 

 

Credit goes to: deathsux.

 

 

 

Sorry but I don't really see any difference. The Original guide's version does however seem correct to me even if it is just missing a comma or something like that

 

 

 

EDITED: There should be the word 'and' after Spade because the If you are describing something for example the last thing your describing should have an 'and' in front of it, for example. Hopefully you see what I'm getting at:

 

 

 

Gorgeous, pretty and beautiful

 

Ugly, disgusting and revolting