yeah im practicing alot well here it is cc is appreciated

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

um.. tx is just horrible dude.. the worst 1 yet so far.. no offence did you copy it..or did you make it 1/10

lol I doubt plya even looked at the bloody thing :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway.. it's ok.. but there's not a lot to rate since most of it's still linework/scetch..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

as for the legs I can say that the left thigh is way too big.

 

 

 

and the shin, well it looks like it's been done inside out.. I mean the muscles are too clear in it compared to the right legs..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway gl doing it.

ok ok sorry 4 being so meen but......... its 5/10 4me

5/10 ok thanks, i didnt copy it im trying to get left side of my brain working dormont for the whole of my life so.. anyway t hanks for the 5/10 i guess i have a long way to get till im concidered half good :S

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i rate your spelling 1/10 :P

Better than 5/10 - don't worry. :) This is a great improvement from your last, to say the least.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think you should really work on sketches and linework before diving into shading and details, though. The shading is good on this, but the figure is a bit of a turn-off, and needs a lot of improvement. It looks like the proportions and perspective of the figure needs the most work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And, IMO, you should try to improve your human figure drawings before moving on to ogres, trolls, and other humanoids.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Remember that linework can still be great drawings, even if it doesn't have shading or details. Anatomy, proportions and perspective is just as important in creating a nice drawing. :wink:

Yeah his left thigh is too big, but overall, i think its pretty good... maybe a 7/10? Not your best work so far, but pretty good. Good luck finishing it! 8)