this is my first pixelsig ever plz rate and give me some advice

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

guy is way to fat, no shading, thin neck, first time lots of room for improvment, also make it lighter its really dark

i think for your first time it looks very good i rate it a 7/10 8)

Sorry guy, but i dont really see good things on it. So i'll just list the things that are bad, and ill try to explain how to fix them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-A star isn't the same as an asterix. Pixel them, and don't use the font's star.

 

 

 

-A santa hat is an Hat, not a 2nd skin, try to make it a little more fitting, it looks like a bandana now.

 

 

 

-Use another font and animation, the one that you are using now is very annoying.

 

 

 

-The moon looks as a boomerang. An idea is to look tonight at the moon, and acutally try to make it the same.

 

 

 

-Anatomy. This is very important, the guy you made looks like an egypt drawing, but in a bad way. Try to face him where he is shooting and perhaps it is an idea to look for a photo of someone shooting with a bow.

 

 

 

-The cat is one colour, try to give it a little more shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That link is a very good way to learn shading. You should check what that guy does, and well it's just good.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm sorry but ill just want to be as honoust as possible and i hope that i didn't discouraged you by saying this. Try to work at those points and im very sure you can make it nice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep up the work !

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Timo

k ty for the tips i wil work on it

Ok great :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm sure it will turn out nice :)