pray_zwami Posted November 19, 2005 Share Posted November 19, 2005 this is my first pixelsig ever plz rate and give me some advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gotsol Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 guy is way to fat, no shading, thin neck, first time lots of room for improvment, also make it lighter its really dark RSN: 1 day late | Private chat: On | 60 ATTACK | 81 STRENGTH | 72 HITPOINTS | | 80 MAGIC | 13 PRAYER | 1 DEFENSE | 65 COMBAT | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fqsdfaze Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 i think for your first time it looks very good i rate it a 7/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timo Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 Sorry guy, but i dont really see good things on it. So i'll just list the things that are bad, and ill try to explain how to fix them. -A star isn't the same as an asterix. Pixel them, and don't use the font's star. -A santa hat is an Hat, not a 2nd skin, try to make it a little more fitting, it looks like a bandana now. -Use another font and animation, the one that you are using now is very annoying. -The moon looks as a boomerang. An idea is to look tonight at the moon, and acutally try to make it the same. -Anatomy. This is very important, the guy you made looks like an egypt drawing, but in a bad way. Try to face him where he is shooting and perhaps it is an idea to look for a photo of someone shooting with a bow. -The cat is one colour, try to give it a little more shading. http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html That link is a very good way to learn shading. You should check what that guy does, and well it's just good. I'm sorry but ill just want to be as honoust as possible and i hope that i didn't discouraged you by saying this. Try to work at those points and im very sure you can make it nice. Keep up the work ! ~Timo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pray_zwami Posted November 20, 2005 Author Share Posted November 20, 2005 k ty for the tips i wil work on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timo Posted November 20, 2005 Share Posted November 20, 2005 Ok great :D I'm sure it will turn out nice :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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