Hopefully Poetic

[Nexaduro]

Simple and short, I almost hesitate to give the little poem it's own thread. Hope you don't mind, and maybe I'll recycle this for future works. Is it against the rules to bump a thread that has undergone a significant edit like a new poem?

 

That world full of angels, of which the pastors preach

That world for the faithful, many feet will never roam

That world's blinding brilliance mortal eyes cannot yet see

Will forever paint this lonely place in shades of monochrome

[Guest Mrmegakirby]

I think it's quite good. If you ever added anything onto it, i'd love to see it.

 

PS: You can edit and bump the thread, but it's not worth it. A lot of people will decide that enough people have posted on it, and you won't get as many views/comments.