well here it is to get a better view look in it in paint to see the shading my first peice of work which is shaded need some cc on this

looks extremely weird...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I have no idea where you are getting at with this.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-look up some tutorial for shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-line work is just too weird..I am sure you watch anime or something. Get some inspiration from it.

looks extremely weird...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I have no idea where you are getting at with this.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-look up some tutorial for shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-line work is just too weird..I am sure you watch anime or something. Get some inspiration from it.

dude i just copied someone shading style

 

 

 

the pic isn't meant to look great its the shading that matters and i can't watch anime i don't have a tv

OK... that person fail...and you follow this person to fail....look at a different shading tutorial.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Or you happens to fail on your own...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No TV for anime, thats ok, you have google.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can hardly tell it is shaded..use a larger different gradient of black.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe you should start shading with balls before you begin to do shading on anything else.