The coming

[scifi70]

Chapter 1

 

Beginings

 

 

 

"No! Its impossible! We are being defeated!" Shouted King Narnode Shareen.

 

"We've got to hold on! Common men!" Hazeelmere shouted, "We can't let them defeat us!"

 

"King, Ive got the illusion machine back up and working again." Brimstail said quietly,"but they are in their true form, no illusions"

 

"Crap! How can we defeate the Arposandran Gnomes? We know nothing about them!"

 

"Just hold on King" Hazeelmere replied, "its all we can do, for the moment....."

 

 

 

***

 

"The Khazard Troops have made a new invention"Elkroy hollered, "IT fires flaming balls of fire at us."

 

"How can we destroy it?" Borlen hollered

 

"There is no possible way we can defeat them"

 

"Then what do we do?"

 

"Try to destroy it with every fiber of our being, it is our only hope"

 

"For the moment Elkroy, for the moment....."

 

***

 

"What is this? Commander Veldaban asked, "There are Chaos Dwarves everywhere. We're being overrun" It was hopeless, the Chaos Dwarves were everywhere.

 

"There is nothing we can do! We just have to hold them off!" shouted the Director of the Blue Opal

 

"I know that! How did they get here?"

 

"I have no idea, but I think it could be the Red Axe!"

 

"Crap, how ccould they do this?"

 

"I have know idea, I am sorry"

 

"What can we do?"

 

"We wait, for the moment, we wait......"

 

***

 

"What's going on here?" Lathas asked the wizard

 

"We are being attacked, my King"

 

"I know that, but how could they sneak upon us like that?"

 

"Ancient Magiks long lost to humans"

 

"How did they get them then?"

 

"Look closely, they aren't humans"

 

"The aren't?" Lathas was stunned, "Your right, they arent"

 

"See,"

 

"Yes, I see. But how are we supposed to defeat them, if they have those Magiks?"

 

"That I do not know,"

 

"Then what do we do?"

 

"For the moment, we wait, for the moment........"

 

***

 

"You must stop this" came one deep voice

 

"Ha, you think I can? This isn't my doing." came an eviler, darker voice

 

"It isn't" said a thrid voice, monotoned, declaring

 

"Oh, Im sorry Brother" the first voice said

 

"You better be, this is from an evil, even beyond me!"

 

"The First Evil is being reborn, we will all be destroyed," the monotone voice said

 

"What? HE is awakening? Darn, we can't itertwine ourselfs to stop him either!" the first voice said

 

"There is one hope." the monotone voice declared

 

"What is that hope?! Im supposed to be the Evil One, how can we stop him?

 

"He is still unaware that he can save the world, but he will come to accept his destinity soon enough" the final voice said

 

"What do we do?!" The first two voices said together

 

"We wait, for now, we wait........."

 

 

 

Chapter 2

 

Awakening

 

 

 

Long Asleep. Long Asleep.

 

 

 

"What, what" Zell said

 

The Chosen One awakes, good. Very Good.

 

"What in RuneScape was that?"

 

"I am Gunthix, protector of Gelinore. You are the Chosen One, the one meant to save the World and protect it from the First Evil.

 

"What is that?"

 

It was the Evil that existed here before even Zamorack came.

 

"Ok, and how am I supposed to save the World?"

 

I cannot interfere anymore, I have done enough as it is. Talk to the Druids, they might be able to help you.

 

 

 

Zell walked up to Sarafew, "What does it mean to be the Chosen One, and what is the First Evil"

 

Sarafew gave a start, "How do you know about those things? They are supposed to be secret. Come with me, quickly"

 

Sarafew lead him to a secret area beneath his house.

 

"What is this place? Ive done Quest for you and I don't know what this is."

 

"All will be made clear in time. Now tell me how you learned."

 

Zell told Sarafew the story."So the great Gunthix talked to you? That is amazing. I knew troubles were poping up all over the World, but this is terrible. Who knew the Coming of the 6th Age could be so troublesome?"

 

"What is going on? Tell me now!"

 

"Alright, if you wish. YOu must save the World."

 

"What?!?!?"

 

"You Must save the World"

 

"Why me?"

 

"It is your destiny. The powers of the gods flow through you! You have access to the most anciet of Magiks. THe Magiks of the Gods!"

 

"Why me, I refuse to do it!"

 

"Like you have a choice in the matter"

 

"I do! And I wont do anything!"

 

Zell walked out of the Basement

 

"Yes, run from in now, but you will accept it sooner or later."

 

Sarafew, to help the boy, you and the Druids must recover the rest of the Circle. Then use it to destory the Rift. Or else we will never win, and Gelinore will perish.

 

"What is needed this time Master?"

 

One herb, the rarest of all of them. IT is used by the things attacking Lathas to completely heal them. IT will cure the circle

 

"What is it called, and who should I call upon to get it"

 

It is called Ikuls and the one called Scifi70 can get it for you, or anyone whose gotten goutweed for you.

 

"I guess I will call upon Scifi70"

 

Gunthix, are you done yet?

 

Just a minute Zamorack.

 

Please hurry. We are running out of time

 

I know that Saradomin, but if the Rift isn't destroyed, we will all perish.

 

"Ill call upon Scifi70, no need to worry about him, just try to get Zell set upon his path"

 

That is the most important thing. We best be off.

 

 

 

I know that the 6th age might really come soon(chaos elemental) but just bear with me, and tell me what you think. I can't make it better without people to help me!

[helmker]

It is very hard for me to decide where to begin. One of the main things that made me hesitant to read is your title. Usually the more mysterious titles draw me in. Also you can never go wrong with short and sweet. DonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t add so much to your name, I find it turns readers away. Dialog sometimes is confusing to readers although I do like how you are approaching the story.

 

 

 

Keep on writing.

[scifi70]

thank you. I needed some help, and I got it. Does anyone else have any more idea?