November 3, 200619 yr AGHHH! GRAGGGH! BLUUUSH! The war was just growing worse when the Black Knights decided to attack Falador. But now with the Great Battle ended, all the White Knights can do is clean up. Restoration begins while somke is continuosly rising from the buildings. What the White Knights didn't know is that just around the other side of the wall, the special teams force of the Black Knights, currently known now as the Imperial Guard, was planning to sabotage the castle. "Hey, is everyone ok?" proclaimed Sir Vincent, a young knight. The housing district was up in smoke. "Hello, is anyone home?" "HELP! HELP! HELP ME! I'M UP HERE, I'M TRAPPED UNDERNEATH THE BED!" cried a helpless citizen. "I'm coming. Just hold still o-" BOOM!!!! Bricks went flying everywhere when Sir Vincent stepped on a hidden dynomite stolen by the Black Knights from the dwarves. No one came out of that house alive. When the house exploded, the special forces unit came in and attemped to take over the castle. They were going for it when............ TO BE CONTINUED IN PART III: SABOTAGE......... :ohnoes: ...ever since that faithful day on Karjama that I fought the evil chicken, things have never been the same...
November 4, 200619 yr Mate, keep all your chapters on one thread, you'll be cluttering up the library if you do any more than 5 chapters. :wink: Anyway, I like it. The chapters are a bit short, and you need to take a new line evrytime a new person speaks. 7/10 2 for shortness, 0.5 for not taking new lines. The other 0.5... well, you can never be perfect. :wall: Proud Legionairre of the 10th Legion of Kandarin.Search for "The 10th Legion of Kandarin" on RSOF to join a small, friendly clan!270 Quest Points and countingRemember - In the gene pool, there is no life guard. :PYou're not getting my point. If you had an IQ above room temperature you would.
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