delete this

Ok, I'm going to give you C/C so bad that it hurts.. :shock: :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Animation:

 

 

 

Choppy, and almost no realism. I don't recommend animating images.. ever!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Text:

 

 

 

Bad font choice, try using a sans serif font, and never ever use glow on text! <_< The text is also too big.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Background:

 

 

 

There is nothing to it, you've added a badly cropped premade C4D and done absolutely nothing to it, at least pull out some brushes and use them! About the fire effect, looks like you've radial blurred it, bad idea if so.

 

 

 

I'd remove the whole fire effect and use abstract brushes instead. Then I'd put the C4D layer on top and set it to "lighten" and reduce the opacity aswell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stock: Bad choice, there is no focal point, no blending at all either. Have a look at my Photoshop FAQ link (in my sig) on how to blend stocks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Quality:

 

 

 

The entire sig is grainy as well. Another downside of using animations.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Things you should work on:

 

 

 

Blending

 

 

 

Text

 

 

 

Depth

 

 

 

Border - You currently don't even have one

 

 

 

Picking better stock images

lol k thnx for that...

 

 

 

ill try to fix it up and such