The Twax Story

[Veltia]

This is an story I started to write once using a website called Twax.dk where I made alot of friends and had some old too. I started writing a story to them but after the site was hacked 5 times alot of the people using the site stopped using it (including me). But I was at the track of an good story so I've decided to write a Novel or story with my cyber-space friends as the characters. I haven't yet made anyfriends from Tip.it but I hope later to include friends from this site too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My mothertongue is not english so therefore my written english is fatal...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Veltia 01/03/2007

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Prologue

 

 

 

Now, it all started in a future not far from where we are now. In the year 2032 a computer code error in the software of a defence ministry called Pentagon fired a weapon, horrible designed to killed many lost decades ago. The weapon flied thousands of kilometres hitting a national monument of another country... Kremlin. Soon the alliances flew across and the world was thrown into a full scale war. After many a decades it was all over but the world had survived and that was most important or what. Even though the evil was fought states was gone under too. Poverty and hunger made it impossible to survive and soon underground gangs started to form, all with the main goal, to overthrow the government and form a super state to conquer the world. But also because of the nuclear waste the humans who survived got affected so mutation and evolution had reached rocket speed and people got different abilities.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1.

 

 

 

Never again?

 

 

 

Veltia stood there, at the ruins of yet another shopping mall. He was just standing there with red-orange hair looking the city. He sighed and mumbled "Never Again they said, but nobody should ever say never ever." He looked up again over looking a city. Yet it was a jungle of stone and rock it was a busy city. Medieval like, yet not many stilled believed in God or Allah or Jehovah or anything. Most of them believed in science. Veltia sighed again, in his left hand he held a book, old battered leather bound book but still a book. At his feet a blue bag with white faded text was. Then another sign of life appeared. A little boy, properly not much younger than Veltia but looked more boyish appeared. He had short brown hair. He came up to Veltia. "So, I knew you were here." He said, Veltia snorted and opened his mouth "So much for friendship Virtualpenguin.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

[Veltia]

Wah... a bit old for a bump, but then I don't recive responses or replys I guess it's a bit... erhm, I've forgot the word, lol!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do you mind reading now, nearly 2 weeks without any replies!

[blackivie10]

heres one,its pretty good but pretty long..the only part i dont like about it i didnt realy read it i skeatched over it -.-

[Veltia]

Oh hurray a reply, but yet I had seriously given up just 'coz first chapter is over 1000 words or something.

[Blue_Eggz]

Looks good. 9/10