Fist_of_ozzy Posted November 5, 2007 Share Posted November 5, 2007 This winter burns blue I will never forget when I saw you Promising something I wouldn't do It wasn't a cry, Yet a shatter As the flame grew fatter Trying to run, Escaping the flame Yet everything remained the same The metal has bent My legs are caught, my days are spent No time left, For this was my death The cold air taking my last breath It was not to forget, But not to remember Oh! What this dreadful day has brought me in this december! What could this possibly be? The death or remains of me Oh love, I failed you. For thy shall not weep Your love was all I could keep One last thing I would mention, before I die I shall not forget, I shall not lie How I will always love you But I shall not forget How this winter burns blue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fist_of_ozzy Posted November 7, 2007 Author Share Posted November 7, 2007 C'mon, Don't be shy. Feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted November 7, 2007 Share Posted November 7, 2007 Don't like it much... but of course, I like very few poems. I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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