hybrid_elite03

there i fixed most of it as with the plot the plot is that he was imprisoned by the zamorak army he then freed himself and got married and his wife had a child several years later hazeel and his men came and took his children somewere far away and hazeel nearly killed him he goes to find his brother for help him on his journey but his brother was kidenapped by hazeel and taken to ice mountin he puts on the spare ring and goes to find his brother with the trolls, ill tell the rest later when i finish the story

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when he awoke he went to find his brother jikel who once served zamorack but surrenderd to guthix, to keep from the fate of death that hazeel would give him he hid on death plateu, using a ring that made him look like troll he lived in a cave on the highest point of death plateu, then he eventually became the troll leader of death plateu because he cold make fire and medicine his brother had recently told the trolls not to harm warlord but he should still be carefull as trolls are stupid and forgetfull as he went up death plateu he took the shortcut his brother made to his cave and when he got there he wasnt there but there was a note, "it said if your reading this note that meens hazeel has found me, my spare troll ring is in the drawer by my bed it will allow you to look like a troll and talk like a troll tell the trolls to go to ice mountin with you and help find thier leader" p.s "my troll name is dak da'k gret'a and yours should be dak do's dret wich is what i told them my brother was named".

The three men were non other than hazeel, the demon Chronozon and Lord Drakan, the cruelest bunch in Zamorak's army hazeel had been the one that locked daniel a.k.a warlord0303 to the wall with chains of runite, and cast a spell so all he would never rememer his name but instead a number of course the number was 0303, all the sudden a fog rolled in in and when it was gone so were his kids and wife everyone was gone except hazeel who the fought warlord to near death and the left him for dead.

Chained to a wall by chains of runite for thirty years, rose Daniel. He broke free, and freed his fellow prisoners. The warrior is known as warlord0303. He soon got married and had a child; a baby girl, her name was Grangil. A warrior by blood. As she was a girl, the Warlord never trained her in the art of swordplay, but that did not stop her from training herself! She soon found a friend; a young orphan, whose dad's life was lost in the war and his mothers a short while after. He too trained with Grangil. One day she brought the boy home with her and from then on, he was welcomed into a new family. One night they awoke to a loud noise. They went outside to find the sky was raining fire. All of a sudden three men appeared.

where can i find the crossbow store

they should make a magic crossbow sorry if this is considered spam please dont lock this fourm

today i got my fletching high enough to make bronze/wooden crossbow but still cant make bowstrings :oops: :( my goal is to be in the rangers guid by 3 weeks from now