Here are some excerpts from some poems i wrote... note that this is not 1 poem, it is different parts of many poems, so a lot of it wouldnt make sense if you combined it into one poem. i jus started writing poetry recently and i want to kno what you guys think of it: I can drown in the deep sea of your eyes... Here I am beside myself (again) Standing in the pouring rain Thinking of how your love once poured down And covered every inch of my body Where has that rain gone? (so far away) There you are again... Raining down on the replacement of me Oh how I have grown to hate him so I want your rain again (beautiful rain) Ill play romeo Youll be juliet And as this tragedy unfolds So will the love we share This gun is loaded One bullet Straight through you And as you fall to the ground I hope you fall just as hard As I fell for you. My love for you falls from my eyes Slowly drips onto the floor... I will always love you Cross my heart And hope to die So stab here X marks the spot Fall asleep to the piercing melody Of me screaming out your name And my desperate cries for you Listen to the song of this broken heart This song is neverending This heart is forever broken (for you) I will love you always and forever ('Til death sets me free) The moonlight shines through the window Spreading light on the darkest shadows of this heart Reflecting on the shattered pieces of what used to be The one thing that you cherished the most Now this heart has wilted and fallen to the ground A black rose laden with blood And if you could only see it now In the light of the full moon In the screaming quiet and stillness of the night You would see all that is left is my love for you Scattered amongst the remnants of this heart, These memories of you cannot be forgotten This love cannot be destroyed Everything Beautiful Comes With Time... (And you're oh so beautiful) ...what do u guys think of it?
