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ROSE ARE RED, VIOLETS ARE BLUE. NO ONE COULD EVER BE, AS VIOLENT AS YOU.
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Chapter 1: The Fall Of Hope Karrora was 14, had a slim figure, was always hungry, and had straight, light brown hair. He sat at his window looking how the rain fell and stared at the drops speeding down his window like if they were racing. He would only stare at Mid-night. Karrora wasn't like other kids, they called him an anti-social teenager and her teachers worried about him yet they didn't care why or what caused it and the only thing that knew why was the rain. He told everything to the rain even his darkest secret. ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅI don't think anyone really cares about me and if they did I would warn them they' get lost̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
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well there is way more to the thing about his dad. It comes later, I just am not finished. My computer doesn't save for some reason so i have to put more coming soon. I don't want to say anything about his father yet because it will reveal a lot and will confuse you. So just wait for that, the rest is kinda true. i did like the first one best. Always the Original!!!!!!!! :wall:
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Chapter 2: The Choice Between Dark And Light ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhat is that", said Kara. "This is the medallion that Midnight wants me to give you", said Mitsuyama. "Who is Midnight, I have never heard of any one with that na-", Kara was interupted. " Yet you talk to him every night and you tell him your life!", Mitsuyama said very boldly. Kara kept looking at the medallion and for a while he thought he was gonna try to ascape. " Follow me and you will not be killed like every one else" Mitsuyama said. Kara was stunned at the thought that if he refused, Mitsuyama would kill him. " The assasin's name is Tentahe and she is my mother, suprisingly Iwould love too kill her right now" Mitsuyama said with a slight giggle. " She left me with my brother and sister when I was 8 years old and I saw her kill my father because he didn't give her a pen as quick as she wanted" He said. As Kara listenned to him speak, he thought in his head about the name Midnight. " Midnight talks to you through the rain" Mitsuyama said. " he is trapped in Horradian, it is a under-water city. The only way tro get there is by walking if not the portal will not open. Sounds so stupid to me but whatever makes it harder for us, my mom will love more" he said. " What does your mom want anyway?" said Kara. "Well she wants you for the reason of making a reincarnation" More soon, pm if you like it so far. I still have tons coming! Not much but time for bed :roll: pandawiz3 \
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plz feedback everything that is on your mind about midnight blue rain. One of the questions i want to know is if i should continue? write as much as wanted and please be truthful. pandawiz3 \
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i could fix it if wanted
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thank you for your comment i just needed to wrap up, mycpu wont save anything for some reason. so i had to wrap it up also because my brother cant sleep with its fan making noise so ya. pandawiz3 \
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Chapter 1 : The Truth Is Revealed Karrora was 14, had a slim figure, was always hungry, and had straight,light brown hair. He sat at his window looking how the rain fell and stared at the drops speeding down his window like if they were racing.He would only stare at Mid-night. Karrora wasn't like other kids, they called him a anti-social teenager and her teachers worried about him yet they didn't care why or what caused it and the only thing that knew why was the rain. He told everything to the rain even his darkest secret. " I don't think anyone really cares about me and if they did I would warn them they' get lost"'said Karrora to the rain. The rain made a rhythm on the glass. Karrora smiled. I knew you'd understand.Karrora went on a walk in the rain every midnight and just talked, no one ever came by or ever listened in on what he said. " The only reason I don't talk to anyone is because al they talk about are tv and games, they don̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t like things like you. But I do", Karrora said. The rain again covered him and soon he fell asleep. When he woke up he was in a puddle which gave him warmth and soon he arose and told the rain, " If my parents cared about me they would come to find me." He tried opening the door but it was locked so he went to his old tree house which there was one relationship that made it feel sort of like a house to him, it was big, cozy, and empty. Korrora spoke so soft the rain didn't hear. In the morning he went to the door and once again it was locked. So he remembered he had money in his pocket. He had doubts that it would be dry after falling asleep in the rain, but when he check everything was wet accept the money. "Hehe, thanks guys", he said softly so only the puddles could here. He grabbed his bike from the garage again not remembering his parents always leave the door from the garage to the house always unlocked in case something like what happened happens. He rode into Kokoro village trying to find somewhere that has good food can fill him up. The Forager pub was his place to usually go but he never drank, smoked, or done drugs. He would go sit down and ask for a water and a tuna sandwich,which they carried both. He didn't feel like going there and ignore the drunk guy that always punched his back for not responding to them, so he went to a restaurant to eat what was an all-you-can-eat place and ate a lunch box worth of stuff. Everything was the same type of routine until he bumped into a tall man with a samurai blade. ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅI... I̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m sorry sir̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
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thanks for helping me with your tips ill certainly do that it is going the way your thinking and it will be revealed in time hope u liked it :thumbsup: pandawiz3 \
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Is misspelling of words a crime in RuneScape?
Pandawiz3 replied to WiivilYoshi's topic in General Discussion
people wont stop spelling these words wrong: wherw=where meany=many tganl-u=thank you mp=no ty pn=no problem seord=sword amou=armour rdpinh= i dont even no wat it means!! its driving me crazy :wall: pandawiz3 \ -
Too many people keep sending me trade invite after looking at my stuff over and over again and asking to have 100k worth for836 feathers and when u decline they say noob and keep asking for free. It would be easier if u could report them for that because i dont see a topic to choose from for that. pandawiz3 :pray:
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moved :arrow: :arrow: :arrow: :arrow: :arrow: :arrow: :arrow:
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Name: pkerforlife lv:35 Wears: monk's robe (yet he hates the monks) Characteristics: Loves to wait till someone dies like if the Noob was close to and about to die he would wait there even if he sees thy have nothing,Always teles people to where they dont think they r gonna go, and likes going to ape atoll for no reason cause hes never played a mini game or agility traing or quests. i hope u like it :ohnoes: pandawiz3 \
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The Camper Tree chapter:1 The Start of a pain
Pandawiz3 replied to Pandawiz3's topic in Art and Media
i made a new one and i no one person who commented on it saying they lked it but it was too short its just at 400 am my mom comes to my room and tells me to go to bed :wall: . im writing more to it and its just your book was so cool and its not right for someone to judge it because its not the way they like it because you put so much work into that story and i am just saying comaped to most long stories i've read yours was the best you seriously could publish it because before my friends father died he published a book "On Solid Ground". He died in a jumping accident in fort bragg. :cry: -
i am making new topic but same but longer story
Pandawiz3 replied to Pandawiz3's topic in Art and Media
ty i thought my mom was coming to tell me to go to sleep so i am definatly writing more. pandawiz3 \ -
show it eand up new
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i liked it! no JUDGING SHOULD BE MADE PERFECT 5 STARS U INSPIRED ME TO WRITE READ IT WHEN EVER. pandwiz3 \
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In a little town a tree called the camper was the shade and hope of the little town. This tree was populated with little sprites from all over china and today was a get together tht happens every century and in one day it would be the day that the Sentinia crystal shines its gazing light out so everyone could see. The day before always was hard to rest because there was so much stuff to do but this time on that day there most reliable helper died of oclireser which is a highly piosonousfruit which is always mistakenfor a apple. They couldnt host the party with-out a tall friend. They sent out puzzles to the village none of them found and they sent one last one out so luck and eventually it was found by a short teenager named Adam Fisher. He was from UK and came because he had problems with using his hands to make things too much and used his teachers desk to make a coffee table. He tried to figure the puzzle out but he didnt understand wat it was. Fially he found out it was like a ribix cube yet it had to make a famous sprite painting. Once he put it together he was trans ported to Giadowa a training fecility in the clouds. To be continued... pandawiz3 \
