raven_gaurd0

OK I got it working. Thanks Master Smither.

OK anybody who reads this, I have a problem. I'm trying to use the image 'Nonoobs' from Wikipedia - Pure Pwnage. I have the original image in the URL coding section and the cropped image in the IMG section, (I had to crop TWO pixels! That sucks! So minor!) Anyway, now it doesn't work right. I need help!

Yeah, yeah, whatever. I just wish Jagex would let me swear to an extent. They won't even let me say 'sig'! BTW mine isn't working. Anybody tell me whats wrong? I got the original off of wikipedia, edited it, then put the edited images address into the second part...

Meh, I never really liked people with like no defense...Man, I P2P PK is the only way to go.

It's vague...in the black library of Warhammer if you've ever heard it. Big science fiction novel.

I'm published brudda, I know what I'm talking about. And I mean, the entire chapter is just dialogue. Dialogue is fine if you know what it's doing and it makes sense (which yours does, but it really wouldn't hurt to use a few more descriptive words) but theres just no setting and character environment...coexistence. Could use some description, you know? Make the setting a little bit more...there.

No offense, but this relatively...um, sucks. You're ripping off of games with names like Hylean, and it lacks a true structure. In addition...all it is is a lot of dry dialogue. Maybe I'M just being a little too sensitive because I'm a writer, but I think it's relatively poor.