what i ment about adding on to it was have your own charecter fight them takeing my place after i died and thank you for pointing out my grammer and punctuation its my 1st story and the fact that it was about 10:30 at night had a little to do with it thanks for the thoughts ill do better with the next one till then.
May i introduce my self I am Vitross A Dark Warrior from the realm of Cysik-Vitum and this is my story.... A Blade.. that's all i came for and look at me now surrounded by a group of Apocalypse knights each ready to rip my body apart even with my Crystal powered armour i got a one in a hundred chance I'm dead i know this but i wont go down without a fight... A Flash.. Silence.. I make my move knowing full well that i will die it doesn't stop me at all in a brief instant i See the face of one of them a masque of pure hatred and evil and i lunge i smell the coppery scent of blood as it runs down my blade an instant later they converge on me and rip me apart... A blackness engulfs me i feel the sweet grasp of death grab me i tried lord knows i tried but it wasnt enough it was never enough i bid you farewell my family friends and enemies well that's all for tonight
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