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true and it's like i've said this for quite some time, here it goes again were goin to try something new if that works i'll go back and fix the pages up

you sure

http://z6.invisionfree.com/Chron_of_Elementias/index.php?act=Attach&type=post&id=677206 here is one of my work drew it from a book My link this is the first page nothing done with it just the first page

Yeah because I haven't been giving any tips at all, right? Your post is pretty much just like clockwork Dan, now we're going to have another couple of pages arguing about the merits of criticism and what is "too harsh" or not too harsh. (Boring). (Not to mention you did nothing to help them so touche.) Get a better scanner if you're having such issues. Or check up on deviantart for a lineart tutorial, it's not very difficult to do (really). If anything just go for that "sketchy" look. And anyways my point is is that even sans-digital the drawing is still really really bad and lacks a lot of basic anatomy. (And yes it is anime so some stretch of imagination is fine but you still need to know the basics first). (Also I'd post the same anatomy link as I always do but no one ever looks at it so forget that). At least show us an un-altered image or something and maybe we can tell you what you are doing wrong. Right now there isn't much to really say other than "draw better" or critiquing the storyline or panel-type. Like I said though manga is really out of my league, I know web-comics a lot better. Oh well this thread is a trainwreck, I'll stop posting here if you want. we are going to re post the pages soon so don't give up on it yet. right now it trial and error we are still trin to figure out which is best. hopfully the improve one works a lot better

I don't need you to explain everything to me. Do whatever you can so it doesn't look like a total failure even if it means spending more time between panels. For someone who is a Senior in high school your artwork is atrocious. (not to mention the way you type makes me think you were in middle school). my art work is alot better trust me those are anime drawings Yeah lets see what you have. If you aren't used to drawing in an anime style, after all, just switch. It's not like you need to draw like that. anime is one of my strong points but hey what can you do going over the lines of a scanned pic with just a mouse, expect better work for the next page also we'll go back and do the same for the other pages till then

I don't need you to explain everything to me. Do whatever you can so it doesn't look like a total failure even if it means spending more time between panels. For someone who is a Senior in high school your artwork is atrocious. (not to mention the way you type makes me think you were in middle school). my art work is alot better trust me those are anime drawings

+1 :lol: I don't understand the meaning of this comic. there reaiy was no meaning when i made it but the thought that i was bored

Fair enough. I don't read manga so I just assume most anime comes from manga first, haha. Your "work" is really bad, and having no money isn't an excuse. You can always draw the pages and then scan them in, after all. I mean you aren't so broke that you can't get a scanner or afford a trip to the library to use theirs right? i'm not using it as an excuse i do the drawing give to the guy and he puts it on the site and its like i said up there it'll get better true that it might suck but its not a total failure besides i did say that i was going to redraw to whole thing once i get materials and school work do come first you know so i don't have a lot of free time 12th grade isn't all that easy either well right not try to keep a 90 average for each class isn't all that easy, but still that is not excuse besides i usually rush things so for now i'm all good on what it turns out for now but it will improve that i can grantee so you can think of it almost like a rough draft

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man you guys do a lot of hate on my work man i mean give the guy a break we'er posting comics up for fun here yes i have a sloppy hand writing but were trin to get materials as of now so it should be better once we get the necessary materials PS its not easy since were broke but i'll go back and make it easier and better once i get it but then again i hate doing a lot of work so i tend to slack off so it's my fault irregardless hope to see more comics by the business gorillas where we always get the job done, and the ultimate Smile where smile at all your problems have a good day until business calls hopefully hopefully it's original got bored there for a moment

whats up dude