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*smashes head on rock* duh!I'll do that now

photoshops 650 bucks......... :roll:

uhhhhh to big? :lol:

I only got paint so its pretty dam hard, I'll scrap these for obvious reasons.....Is this one any better,I know it needs resizing. Edit:text is messed fixing soon

I really like it!It would be better if you had made it creepier like you were gonna originally though,8.5 :lol:

Im not the best at these so no flaming, wich ones better?

one word for you brooce-repetitive

ok all chap 4 is up enjoy

well the last part wasnt so good(srry)second to last part owned,the first part was the second best part though.very good story =)

Ok.....even though no one bothered reading part three heres part four-its a plot builder(again) and may be a little boring to some Chapter 4: The buried temple Minutes seemed as if they were days as Peter awaited to discover Khyren's fate. Both their fates would have been sealed had Kollodin not have been crushed by Vannaka. The legendary warrior had arrived just in time to sever the maniac's head. The hero had been notified of Zaff's treachery by Merlin and had departed to find Kollodin laying waste to Seer's village. Peter was thankful for this at least but still would not be able to face Khyren's death. " May Guthix give him life," Peter prayed softly. " The Gods listen not to prayers from one such as yourself," Vannaka took a swig from his flask," They are far to occupied with other matters, far more important than his life," " What matters are those?" Peter asked," Why would our Gods forsake us?" " To protect us fr-" Vannaka stopped himself," All I can tell you is the orgin is Digsite, something not meant to be found was found," He waved his hand at the destruction surrounding them," This is nothing compared to what happens if this discovery is not contained," Peter glanced to his left where medics were treating Khyren for his bad wounds. " Could I assist in containing it then?" Peter asked. " I suppose.....But from what I have learned little hope exists in this dying world," ------------------------------------------------------- " My son; please do not leave your family for a matter that will only take your life," Mezoin, and Al-Kharid buisnessman pleaded to his son. " I am sorry but whether I go to face this enemy or wait here eventually I would have to face it. What honor would there be in that? I must use my skills for a noble cause rather then let others die," Me-drok, Mezoin's son replied. Me-drok was the greatest swordsman in Al-Kharid. He fought with a red blade he acquired from a shady warrior he defeated in the duel arena and the rusty bronze sword he used as a child. He had become well known when he crushed a vicious nomadic leader who had been considered the greatest swordsman prior to the defeat. " I understand my son, I will not stop you from pursuing your destiny," Mezoin stepped from Me-droks path and nodded to his son. " Father, should this challenge should claim my life I ask that you do not grieve but rather enjoy the last days of your life," Me-drok stated selflessly. " What enemy will you be facing son?" Mezoin asked curiously. Me-drok shuddered. " I speak not his name, hearing it was burden enough for me. Just the whisper of his name strikes fear into the Gods, eveb more then it terrifies us, for they have heard from their ancient brothers the extent of his wickedness," Me-drok paused," But please do not bother yourself with these thoughts, pray for my victory instead," And with that he pushed through the door into the searing heat of the desert. ---------------------------------------------------------- Darkness covered the cold, damp room. In the shadows a small wretched creature crawled, stuggling to breathe. The musty air entered its lungs and it began to cough. A beam of light shown from a crack in the temples roof, just enough for the being to look down at its torn and weathered hands. It let out a cry of agony and burst into a fit of coughing. A small spider scammpered by catching its attention. Its hand shot out and grasped the minute arachnid. It licked its dry, crusty lips and swallowed the eight legged creature. With a gurgle of glee it hobbled away into the temples deeper chambers. A rock suddenly shattered drawing the creatures attention. It had fallen from the area where the light shined. It hastily drew out a primitive dagger, more like a pointed stone. Voices came from above. " I think we should await the others to proceed any further," A quiet voice said. "Fool, there will be treasure below if indeed it is the lost temple," A louder voice boomed. "But even so! Great perils also await us, " The weaker voice spoke. Below the disgruntled creature gave a nervous grunt and began banging its dagger against a rock causing a tremendous noise. The two men above yelled in fear and sprinted off. A roar of victory boomed from the underground temple. Above the two men(adventurers from Falador) were running from the ruins above the temple. A gust impacted them knocking them down. A figure wielding a long steel sword and a red shield appeared. "Mercy!" yelled the smaller man as he shielded his face. The ominous being let out a laugh and helped the man up.As they drew closer the man realized he was none other than Vannaka. " I supose you were investigating the ruins? I advise againstdoing such, there are many wicked things there including the grand priest of.." Vannaka muttered a name to the man who winced and began to shake. " Forgive me! I meant to help the greater good," He bowed his head. "We have nothing to be sorry for! Let this old warrior go, obviously he is headed to the temple, one should practice what he preaches!" The bulkier man yelled at Vannaka. Vannaka shook his head and brushed by them. "Idiot, he should die sooner instead of later and do us a favor!" The man yelled after Vannaka intending for him to hear. Vannaka let out a laugh and walked to the crack leading into the temple. With a mighty swing of his sword the temple's roof was split open revealing a disgusting chamber. A hideous creature vanished from his sight emitting a screeching noise. Vannaka dropped down and began his pursuit.It was to be his last hunt.

Chapter 3 is complete at last, I had to cut it a little short. I've gotten mixed reactions on its quality, some say its the best though Im not so sure, anyways read and enjoy! Chapter 3:The Truth "It would appear I was right about you," Kollodin mocked as he pulled the large arrow from Zaff's neck. The wounded mage gave a pained grunt as the arrow tip came out of his soft flesh. The two were sitting on a rock under the Mage Arena. " But while your still alive I do need to know what Saradominist fool did this to you," Kollodin spoke smoothly," Well?" " There are two that seek me....." Zaff spoke, pained greatly," One is named Khyren, he is the greatest archer in all of Varrock...The other is a powerful mage, whos name I know not," Zaff stroked his throat and licked his dry lips. " Where did you last see these two?" Kollodin asked," Before I found you in Yanille," "I fought them in Camelot castle after masacring the knights of the round table," Zaff began to cough. " Excellent!" Kollodin roared joyouslly," And you did take the runestones from Merlins collection right?" "Yes.....Of course..."Zaff mumbled. " Perfect....I can begin to wage my.." Kollodin looked down at Zaff," Well it matters not to you..." Kollodin stood and drew out a dagger,"I can assure you this will be most painful," He raised the blade and brought it down into Zaff's throat, and with that done threw his motionless body into the pool by his side. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- " Who commited this atrosity?" Seer, the founder of seer's village asked Kollodin. " It was Khyren of Varrock and his minion, a mage of great power and cunning, I suggest yo-" "I need some proof," Seer cut in," We cant set out to capture these people without proof, even if one such as yourself garuntees they are guilty," "Well....I recovered a bone tipped arrow, one only Khyren uses, and I have a reliable source who assures me the burn marks on Camelot's wall are caused by a powerful fire spell only a mage such as the one that accompanied Khyren," Kollodin carried on," Do you need more?" "No I suppose that suffices. But let me warn you, if Im sending these men to their death for naught I shall not forgive you," Seer stroked his long white beard. " Do you know their location then?" Kollodin asked hopefully. " Yes actually....They are harbored in my quarters," Seer gestured to his two story home, just west of where they were standing. " May I deal with them myself?" Kollodin requested eyeing the building. " You mean.....Kill them?" Seer asked with surprise, clearly not thinking of his good friend as a murderer. " Yes, yes I do," Kollodin replied coldly," I show criminals no mercy," Kollodin strode towards Seer's home as he drew out a short staff from his cloak. He poked the door open with the staff's red prongs. Inside the house Kollodin heard voices from above. He peered back to be sure Seer was not following and when he was satisfied that no one was watching began to convulse. His muscles expanded as did his jaw and hair. Now in his place was a tremendous ogre mage growling angrily. He leaped up crashing through the ceiling. Peter was sent flying from a chair he was sitting in and collided with a wall. Kollodin grabbed him by the leg and chucked him at the startled Khyren who was sitting on a table, apparently interrupted mid sentence by the attack. The impact sent him backwards off the table. Kollodin violently swung at the already incapacitated duo. Khyren took the strike and and leaped to his feet roaring with anger. Kollodin smashed Khyren over the head causing the floor to crack open. As Khyren and Kollodin fell to the first floor Peter grabbed a few runes and launched a wind blast spell. Kollodin was struck on the back of his neck and crashed to the floor in a mangled heap. Khyren was pinned underneath Kollodin's large body. "Peter! Get this thing off me!" Khyren yelled franticly as his ribs began to crack under the enourmous weight. But before Peter made a movement the ogre began to implode until it was a small ball of dark purple matter. Suddenly it expanded and took the form of a large gray giant. Khyren, relieved from his pain, grabbed his bow and launched an arrow into the giants chest. It looked down and prepared to crush him when suddenly an enourmous wave of fire impacted him, sending him through the wall and into the open daylight. Seer looked over in shock as the giant crashed through his houses wall. Following the giant came a number of powerful wave and blast spells. Khyren fitted an arrow into his bow and let it fly. The giant was struck in the eye by the arrow and knocked off his feet by the spells. It gave out a roar and began to implode. It took the form of a ball once more and this time expanded into a gigantic black spider. It raised its fangs as it thrust itself towards Khyren. Peter fired off another wave spell wich was dodge by the extremely agile arachnid. Khyren hastened to ready an arrow but was struck by one of the spiders legs causing him to fall. It plunged its fangs into Khyrens neck and injected its venom. Khyren's face paled and he slumped backwards. "Khyren!" Peter roared. He reached into his robes and felt around for runestones but found none. " You may be a powerful mage young one, but I can assure you that surrendering to death would be wisest," Kollodin spoke wickedly. " WAIT!" Seer yelled," Kollodin is that you?" Seer peered through his kind eyes at the murderous insect. " Yes it is I," Kollodin hissed," I suppose you wish me to cease my assault," Kollodin imploded once again as he spoke these words. " Yes that would be very nice, I can see you have been manipulating our friendship," Seer stared at the ball of matter," I ask you to leave, my old friend," " Very well..." Kollodin's voice echoed from all around," But first let me say good bye," Kollodin appeared in his human form and walked towards Seer. Suddenly seer leaped forwards and expanded into a unicorn. Kollodin jumped back in genuine surprise but was still speared by Seer's horn. Seer charged forward with Kollodin on his horn and rammed him into one of his house's undestroyed wall. Kollodin slumped over, seemingly lifeless. Seer repeatedly rammed Kollodin against the wall until blood began to spill from his stomach wound. Kollodin fell from the horn as it retracted into Seer's now human forehead. " I should have known you were treacherous," Seer gazed down at Kollodin who stared back with damp eyes. " Can you ever forgive me? I have always been corrupted by Zaff, please understand he was my brother but would kill me if I assisted in capturing him," Kollodin stood grasping his stomach wound and began to shake," Please....I beg you.....speak not of this incident but instead of all the good things I have done for your community!" "Im sorry, Old friend.... but I can see through your lies. It was indeed Zaff who murdered the Knights of the Round Table. And I know it was you who corrupted him. Place not your blame on those pure of soul but on those who are deserving of the burden," Seer glared at Kollodin. " Quite a speech my dear friend but Im afraid now I must end this meeting in a way I was trying to avoid," Kollodin sighed. His robes became part of his skin and he was now black as the night. He grew to the height of a nearby Yew tree as wings burst from his back. Flames burst from about his feet as he gave a tremendous roar. He was now in the form of a great black demon with piercing red eyes that burned into Seer's still peaceful eyes. " What say you now small man?!" Kollodin boomed in a powerful voice. He thrust his tail into the already crumbling house behind him causing it to cave in on Peter and Khyren. " You truthfully are mad. I would have killed you had I known what I knew now when we first met," Seer spoke with a stern voice. " Ahahaha! If you had known what you knew now you would have been dead long ago!" Kollodin leaped forth and drove and enourmous claw into Seer. Seer's stomach was torn open by the razor sharp claws. As his inards poured out Seer smiled for he knew the madmans fate. Seer threw a bag under the demons huge legs wich was intercepted by Peter who had been waiting for an opening. He opened the bag and began pulling death and blood runes out. Kollodin turned and launched a spiral of flames wich was instantly overwhelmed by a wave of wind. Kollodin was knocked backwards and smashed into the ground. Peter dove into the bag again and pulled out a tiny rune with intricate purple markings. Peters eyes widened as he studied it. "What in blazes?" Peter exlaimed as it seemed to call him. Kollodin gave a deep inhale, the demonic equivelent of a gasp. He stood and lashed out at the mage only for a water blast to strike him in the face. " Surrender and I will spare you! Just please hand over the runestones!" Kollodin begged Peter. Peter looked at the great demon as it began to panic. " Whats wrong Kollodin?" Peter asked casually. " You dont understand, what you hold could easily destroy me and all in this village. It is the most powerful rune in existence, only six exist and I have once felt ones power. As a matter of fact its what gave me this power....however it is also what destroyed the first mage arena...I implore you to give it to me, I vow I will leave you be," Kollodin said in a deep voice. Peter eyed the stone and with great desire but with a deep heaved tossed it to Kollodins feet. " There now leave," Peter said," I do hope you do as you promised," Kollodin plucked the stone from the ground. " I also must have forgot to mention it was I that destroyed the first Mage," Kollodin said wickedly as he devoured the stones energy. He pounced on Peter and smashed his face into the dirt. Kollodin cracked his thick neck and leveled the bank with a crack of his tail. Peter looked up from the dirt and slowly tried to crawl to Khyren whos legs protruded from the wreckage of Seers home. Flames burst from Kollodins mouth and began to burn the village. " Peter......" Khyrens voice came from under the rubble. Peter looked over and saw Khyrens face poking out from two cracked wooden planks, it was swollen and blood splattered. " Please give me my bow... It is time for redemption," Khyren spoke in a pained voice as he gestured to the large Ogre bow jetting from the houses remains. Peter tore out the bow and an arrow and placed them across Khyrens chest. Khyren forced himself to a sitting position and raised the bow. He placed an arrow in its shaft and took aim through the flames at Kollodin. " Good bye my dear friend, Im sorry it had to end like this," Khyren pulled back the string with all his might and with a final smile released it. The arrow flew through the air like an Hawk soaring to its prey. Kollodin looked up from his destruction he was causing and was met with the bone tipped arrow. It pierced his eye and continued on until it was lodged into his skull. He gave a roar and blindly charged at Peter and Khyren. " Well Khyren its been great, I pray to see you on the other side," Peter said as he grasped Khyren's hand. As the demon drew ever nearer a sword flashed in the flames painting the ground with blood.

oh well tahst the way i do mine, my bad

hey,YOU try making a story that fast, let alone one this good!Give the man a break hes obviously busy.

Hm quite good, hope part 2 is posted soon :D

wow it seems everyone really likes the newest addition!But get this.....Im getting a c- in my language arts class.My teachers really bad though and everyone hates her because she trys and make you fail.Lol,part 3 may be up tonight with any luck :lol: