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well thnx again

i agree. nice pic btw konkanprogram

wow thnx man.

oo pick me plz i need a sig. can u put in silverion21 as the name and like a sword or sumthin if u want to put a pic in. plz pick me thnx.

yeh lets all blabble on about ice cream, cookies and cream is great....i think the waffle cones better than normal ones..... lol nah great story man

As for the flame war getting started..... Everyone is entitled to a different opinion, and everyone will "see" this story in a different perspective. Writing ability is not one simple attribute, it takes many abilities to write a truely great piece of art. Age and intelligence like you two have stated, but it is more than that. The way you live, and events that occur in life, your firends, quality of life all change your writing. People who have a passion for literature will usually be able to write better then someone who doesn't really care. The list could go on forever.Your both right in your own mind, so don't fight about it; just sit back and enjoy this great story. Keep up the good work Tenshi, I will surely read the next one. I second that :D

Hm good for a diary entry, but i suggest making it into a story and put in detail. That would be great. Think about it, but otherwise good job

Hm seems like a word fights comin on... :( Well good work on the second chapter as well as the first. Very powerful emotions showing there. short and sweet. great job :D

yeah kewl story, good job :)