Romulus8604

Well the dialog is 'rough', that is why it reminds me of an action movie. Then again, you have to start somewhere. Keep with it. :P

These are like action movies put into text. Reminds me of those R. L. Stine books. With not as much character development.

An ancient pedestal standing in the middle. Stars shining like beautiful gems high above. There blows a gentle evening breeze. A circular field enclosed by trees. Where people dance moodily in groups of threes. Swaying to and fro to the rhythm they love. Beautiful mountains rising off in the distance. The trees are all tall, majestic and evergreen. A mist rolls in carrying a scent quite sweet. Beads of dew clinging to the dancers feet. As an unseen, sighing chorus keeps the hypnotic beat. As they dance tonight on this night of dreams. Clouds of evening grays wrap around the clearing. Tendrils of light spew from the pedestal weave in and out. Beads of light explode silently into the air. Landing gently or floating lazily as if without care. The clouds shine golden and thin like strands of hair. And still the groups dance throughout. A stunning flash and theyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re gone; like a dream.

Ouch. That actually hurt.

I am a little morbid I suppose. Rhyming is something I do a lot it helps me concentrate and stay on task. It's not something I always do.

Alright, I've seen poems, short stories and other literary works here. I must admit I didn't fully take the time to look everything over. I have work to go to in four hours. So I will make my first post that of a song I have written. I gave description as to how each verse and chorus is meant to be heard. Drawing 1st verse-soft pleading whimper. I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t know what to do with my self. I just wanna tear down your health. Why donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t you ever give up and melt. Am I always hurt by what youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ve dealt? ThereÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s things in this world I canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t take. Never helping not even for your own sake. ~chorus~ lines 1 and 3 soft loud lines 2 and 4 screamed. I feel like IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m gonna kill some one IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m tired of these lies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll only be happy when youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re covered in flies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ 2nd verse-soft pleading whimper. I try to scratch away at my ears. I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t wanna listen, but itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s all to clear. Controlling what I thought was numb. My cures is a needle away I want some. Contorting my views twisting my thoughts. If I donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t get my love this blood will clot. ~chorus~ lines 1 and 3 soft and loud lines 2 and 4 screamed. I feel like IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m gonna kill some one IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m tired of these lies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll only be happy when youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re covered in flies When I kill ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ 3rd verse-harsh loud whisper last line screamed. I wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t give up until IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m dead. All I hear is you inside my head. Nails scratching through the bed. All I hear is you inside my head. Pounding fists into lead. All I hear is you inside my head. But all I want is my med!