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Wow thanks DK. I like the ranger idea, I think I'll add that in next. My next question was going to be where I could find some info for the human anatomy, but you just answered it for me, lol. That was very helpful. Thanks very much. Keep the comments coming.

Im sorry to double post, but I've just updated. I've fixed up the lava, and improved the texturing on the ground. I've dithered the sky, however; in the process, forgot to put the stars and moon back on. I'll do that on the next update. Also, I've made an attempt at dithering the mountains - it's given them a softer look. There's also been some dithering added to the big tree on the right side of the piece. Oh yes, I also added a volcano so the lava actually has a place to flow from. The sword hilt, and the dead guys arm have also been fixed. Although I'm still not sure about the arm. It still feels really empty to me, is there anymore C&C? Again, thanks for any help in advance.

As someone said, I think maybe her skirt is a little too low. Also, I think it may well be just me - but her stance seems a little un-natural to me. Everything else is fine, I look foward to seeing the finished result.

Where exactly can I dither on my sig? There aren't exactly all that many large-scale colour transitions. I suppose I could give it a shot on the mountains though. Also, I need some tips with the texture on the ground, and texturing the lava river. As you've said, the lava is really dodgy. I've fixed the arm and the sword, but I won't bother posting it until I've fixed ground and lava texture.

Sweet, thanks very much Darrel. That was exactly what I was looking for. I'll read through it a couple more times, and see what I can do. I rushed the line work pretty well, and didn't take a real lot of time to think about what I was doing. Im getting a tablet for christmas, so whether that helps or not - most people won't consider it pixel work, but oh well. Thanks for your comment.

EDIT: After C&C/Editing Hey all, I've just started pixeling - and this is my first. I'm really not sure where to go from here, so I'd like some advice - perhaps just what else I could add, or where I could improve upon. Any help is appreciated. NB - incase anyone was wondering, Vercetti069 is my main. Thanks