The tension rose, pressure high,

 

 

 

Missiles streaking through the sky,

 

 

 

ThatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s what possessed Japan to act,

 

 

 

A bloody day of huge impact

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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That was absolutely amazing, and very touching. After I read this it made me take a moment to think about the cost Pearl Harbor was to Japan. Great rhyming scheme, great use of words, but most of all great way to get into a person's heart. However, it could use a little work on maybe taking the smaller, average words and turning them into some creative, rhyming words.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Great poem nevertheless and I hope to read more from you,

 

 

 

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