Clown Posted March 11, 2007 Share Posted March 11, 2007 The tension rose, pressure high, Missiles streaking through the sky, ThatÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s what possessed Japan to act, A bloody day of huge impact ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYou started it!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-mbball- Posted March 12, 2007 Share Posted March 12, 2007 That was absolutely amazing, and very touching. After I read this it made me take a moment to think about the cost Pearl Harbor was to Japan. Great rhyming scheme, great use of words, but most of all great way to get into a person's heart. However, it could use a little work on maybe taking the smaller, average words and turning them into some creative, rhyming words. Great poem nevertheless and I hope to read more from you, mbball ^Thank you Despaxes for the sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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