if you're bullied rap (incomplete)

[dacona]

tell me what ya think.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if you're bullied,

 

 

 

dont get worried.

 

 

 

dont get stressed,

 

 

 

dont get depressed,

 

 

 

there bad,

 

 

 

cuz they make you sad,

 

 

 

and that makes me mad,

 

 

 

they are taking you for a ride,

 

 

 

dont comit suicide,

 

 

 

when they yell just go tell,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

chorus:

 

 

 

these bullies deserve to die,

 

 

 

they hurt you and i duno why,

 

 

 

just be stong and dont cry,

 

 

 

it'll be allright,

 

 

 

dont cry at night,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you're bullied,

 

 

 

but you're no longer worried,

 

 

 

you just want blood,

 

 

 

you want em dead,

 

 

 

you wish you could,

 

 

 

just end there puny lives,

 

 

 

then kill there to-be wives,

 

 

 

cuase you see what hurts the most,

 

 

 

is how that they boast,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

chorus

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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what do you think of it so far then?

[dacona]

anyone gonne post

[therealtermenator10]

What the...

these bullies deserve to die,

 

 

 

you just want blood,

 

 

 

you want em dead,

 

 

 

you wish you could,

 

 

 

just end there puny lives,

 

 

 

then kill there to-be wives,

 

 

 

cuase you see what hurts the most,

 

 

 

is how that they boast,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No one "deserves to die". These probably aren't your feelings or anything, just easy to rhyme, right? But man that's just sad, and horrible. Work on spell check too. For example, cuase and cuz are spelled cause. If I had to rate 2/10. Please don't get mad, just replying to your story, or "rap". And that brings me to another thing, are trying to "rap" like Eminem or POD. Some of their songs are good, but sad. But this is brutal