rate this from 1-10

 

 

 

 

 

 

if u want i mite sell it just tell me if u wanna buy

4/10 Here is why

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-1 point for no shading

 

 

 

-1 point for low detail

 

 

 

-1 point for using so many line tools

 

 

 

-1 point for no ground near castle

 

 

 

-1 point for the volcano or what ever it is

 

 

 

-1 point for eyes (He has no pupils)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Besides all that the theme is good. If i was you i would use my critisim to make it better by editing it.

ok theres no ground near the castle cuz theres a hill there

 

 

 

he has no pupils cuz hes not actually a living human...hes more zombie or demon

I think you gotta a really good concept going there but you used the line tool way to much, just for future reference you'll get the best result if you draw it yourself, also shading is a must for any pixel. Shading is basically what makes or breaks your pixel. So work on shading and draw freehand and I think you got a lot of potential.

ok here is my edited version of it

 

 

 

 

 

 

how do u liek this 1?

now the background is to empty lol try adding a mood or something lol