So I had nothing else to do, so I wasted aprox. 3 hours painting this. Just tell me what you think. Oh yeah and my name is Taneli and I get called Tauno so that's why that reads there.. O:)

 

 

 

well your anatomy needs some important fixing, as the torso is way too wide compared with the arms. the torso could also be longer, for now it looks like he got a weird torso and one of the legs is way wide than the other. the hands for now have very thin and weird fingers. the sky has a very strange colour, considering that its supposed to be night as there is the moon visible. a bit AA wouldnt hurt the moon, the character and the castle.

 

theres a lack in the texture of the floor, and i would dither in the cloth shading. the clothing needs more folds.

 

 

 

and for gods sake get rid of the black linework :?

Pretty good for a start, I insist you put more time into it. The body and be thinned a little and shoulders don't need to pop out so much.

 

I think my favorite part of this is the background and the perspective on the zombie above the 'AU' part.

well your anatomy needs some important fixing, as the torso is way too wide compared with the arms. the torso could also be longer, for now it looks like he got a weird torso and one of the legs is way wide than the other. the hands for now have very thin and weird fingers. the sky has a very strange colour, considering that its supposed to be night as there is the moon visible. a bit AA wouldnt hurt the moon, the character and the castle.

 

theres a lack in the texture of the floor, and i would dither in the cloth shading. the clothing needs more folds.

 

 

 

and for gods sake get rid of the black linework :?

 

 

 

Thanks for this constructive critisism, and it's just that I don't have enough patience to do longer works. Maybe if I really try and not to be too much in hurry.. I'll try again other day. And yeah I know, my anatomy s00x.. :oops:

Time is irrelevant in art. There are sculptors who takes years to create their best pieces, and painters who paint masterpieces in a single sitting.

 

 

 

Some problems have already been outlined, but I see your the biggest flaws as the linework and anatomy. What you've done so far seems almost carelessly done, I would go so far to say that this borders on Oekaki. Spend the time to refine your work.

 

 

 

Grargh.

Time is irrelevant in art. There are sculptors who takes years to create their best pieces, and painters who paint masterpieces in a single sitting.

 

 

 

 

In this case it is. For one you are comparing 3 different types of art and not calculating how large the piece is. For this the canvas is fairly large for a pixel and is in need of more time.

Shade, there are sculptors who have spent months on pieces that could potentially be done in days or weeks, and painters who can spend 45 minutes and create some very well known paintings. The point is that the time you spend is not relevant, it's the finished work that matters.