A poem I wrote to my girlfriend

[Ultralord]

It's for our one month anniversary..

 

 

 

When I'm with you,

 

I feel graced,

 

My love for you is true,

 

My sadness is erased

 

 

 

Your soft voice never silent,

 

It's forever in my ears,

 

Serenading every moment,

 

And calming all my fears

 

 

 

Your eyes hold endless beauty,

 

Blue like a cloudless sky,

 

When they look back at me,

 

I no longer feel shy (couldn't think of anything lol)

 

 

 

There are many other things,

 

As to why I feel this way,

 

Joy is what you bring to me,

 

Every single day

[Hellsing601]

Good Job!

[tripsis]

Aww that's sweet :) Congratulations on one month! :thumbsup:

 

 

 

The "I no longer feel shy" line could use a bit more thought/revision, but other than that it's great! \ I'm sure she'll love it!

[Tim]

they say that the best gift is from the heart and im sure you just showed that. congrats on your month anniversery. personally, i gave up romance after a few tragic things happened so i havent got a lust for it anymore, i prefer to write my stories/poems on dragons, always been facinated by them since i was 5, despite there only a myth. enough of me, im sure she'll like it.

[homegirl911911999]

thats so sweet its a good poem nobody ever wrote me a poem :cry: waaaaaaaaaaa! just joking ha ha ha lol.