Vogue

[JordanGM]

Helpful comments are appreciated. I'm 13 going on 14, and I felt like writing this. I hope you like it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vogue Lalonde had just got home from another frustrating day at school. She walked to the kitchen and grabbed a bite to eat before going upstairs to relieve some stress by playing a little bit of RuneScape. She went up to her room and had some trouble turning on the computer, which got her even more stressed out. "Like school wasn't enough.." she thought.

 

 

 

That day, at her high school, she was reviewing her history notes at lunch, before her exam when some of the seniors came to sit down at there regular table, where Vogue was sitting. "Move." said one of the seniors. Vogue disagreed. "No, I was sitting here first, and theres no other empty seats." One of the seniors grabbed her and threw her on the ground. Out of rage, she got up and punched the girl that threw her on the ground. Her action quickly started a small fight, in which Vogue was hit a few times and her shirt was ripped. When she left the table, bruised and bloody, she ran into the principal. After half an hour of discussion, Vogue hadn't admitted to getting into a fight. Since she wouldn't tell the principal what happened, she was suspended.

 

 

 

Vogue logged onto rs, and found that she had been hacked. She simply started to cry. "Why is everything so hard?! Why?! Why God?" She continued to play rs, trying to get some money to get her started, again. She had asked a few friends for some, but they weren't willing to give any away, so she went around asking random people. She got a few 'noob' responses. She was incredibly frustrated at this point.

 

 

 

Vogue was known to have suicidal thoughts sometimes. Her therapist had really helped to calm her down at some moments, but even after countless hours of therapy, she was still a little bit suicidal and maybe even insane.

 

 

 

She decided to ask one more person for some cash before going downstairs to eat supper. "Hi, I just got hacked, can I have a little bit of cash to get started again please?" she politely asked. "No idiot! Stop begging dumb n00b! I bet u hav no frends idiot.. get a life stupid ****** bch!" is what the player replied. Vogue just cracked. She threw her monitor on the ground and started screaming. She punched right threw her window. Bloody and filled with an insanely evil rage, she ran to the rooftop of her apartment building. She was ready to jump, but her mom ran out of the rooftop door. "Vogue! WAIT!" she screamed. "We can work this out! Honey just come here! Please."

 

 

 

 

 

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Okay, you've already read it, so why not post?

[JordanGM]

Chapter Two Coming soon.

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O...k it was...a bit I don't know. It was sort of lacking in some key element, probably length, but there was something important missing. Just seemed more like the bare bones of a story rather than a real story....I think it was ok though.