Once again, good job. I like the detail in the fight. I noticed 1 spelling error, in the very first sentance, nothing big though. Keep up the good work, I would make a longer post but time is not my friend at the moment.

Have you got anymore now?

:shock: Damit I love it soo much! I too am an anime/manga fan and when I read this it plays out in my mind like one! 8) I can't wait for the next scene- ahhh i'll die if I dont hear it! :D You rock tenshi-chan!

Chapter three Part two ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Weakness

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYou are useless. ThereÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s no point in hitting someone who wonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t fight back.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

ouch...!

Keep it up

i really like this it is good. i cant wait for the next part =)

Yhea I can't wait for the next part too. :shock:

when is it going to come out?

Stories are really hard to write,sometimes, lol

 

 

 

Maybe she'sjust taking her time. ooor making us wait in suspense to tease us... either way:

 

 

 

I CANT WAIT! WOOOO!!

yer i know they can be hard to wright, but, well, if you like this story then you want to put the people under presseure so they come out with the next instalment =)

Well, the writer has really got us hooked! I cant wait! w00t :shock: :D

*pile of bones next to a computer*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hehehe look at the time sense my last post. lol

Sorry guys, writing one story, let alone two is pretty daunting. o.o I messed up the story though, so you may want ot look out for my other storl Isabella: Wolf Rider. XD But here, the next chapter:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter four Part two ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Recovery

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Two days of rest followed the night when the fight had happened. Three days afterwards, Landon felt he was ready to go back to school. His muscles still hurt when he moved, but only slightly. The pain was not bad enough that it overpowered his desire and need to see Hikari. Over the days he had been resting, he had been thinking about his life ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ about himself. He knew that he was not very strong, although he was fit, and he felt a desire to be strong, to be able to protect those around him, so he decided that he would train himself to be stronger. Landon had it all planned out ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ once he had recovered, he would travel to the gym whenever possible to train himself. Although this sounded simple, he could not let anyone know. He did not understand why, but there was a feeling in his heart that this was something he had to achieve by himself. Something he needed to do alone in order for him to really achieve his goal.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Landon stopped off the bus steps and silently thanked the person that had invented public transport. It had saved him walking the 30 minutes trip to school; it would have been grueling with the slight pain which still lingered in his muscles.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As he walked through the school gates, he gazed around at the scatted group of students around the yard, trying to spot Hikari. When he found no signs of her, he walked back through the gates, scanning the path for any sign of her. In a few minutes, HikariÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s head came slowly into view. She seemed to have trouble walking, and as she walked closer Landon saw that she was wincing a little with each step, and she held her back steadily, keeping it perfectly straight as if it hurt to move it. Her face was watching the path, her eyes fixed beneath her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

LandonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s eyes grew wide at this sight and he ran to her. As he did this, little jolts of pain shot up his leg, but he ignored it and continued running, only slowing when he was close to her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

At the sound of his quick footsteps, Hikari looked up slowly and fixed her gaze on Landon. He smiled a little and she seemed to make an attempt to smile back, her mouth twitching a few times before a weak smile appeared on her face. Afterwards, the smile disappeared from her face and she took a large breath before walking slowly towards Landon, the bells on her bag tinkling softly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

With every step she winced, and LandonÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s eyes slowly traveled down her body. His eyes widened a little when he saw her elbows ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ they were scratched and had been clumsily patched up with a few band-aids. His surprise turned to sadness and he walked forwards towards Hikari, reaching inside his pocket to take something from inside.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When Landon was in front of her, he gently took HikariÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s hand and found that he was trembling slightly. He quickly pressed what he had taken from his pocket into HikariÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s palm, and then wrapped his other hand around HikariÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, gently forcing her fingers shut around the item. She looked upwards at his face with a look of mingled surprise and curiosity.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Landon leaned towards Hikari and mumbled into her ear: ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅThis is for you, I hope you are feeling betterÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæItÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s not much, but I hope you like it.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Still good I'm working on a couple stories myself though 1 I havent worked on in a couple months(No name yet) and the other I can't put on here because of a certain friend who might read it(The order of the Crimson Pheonix).

*sob* that was soo cute.